The next story will be, "Just made the best orange cheesecake."

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And all of this happened because you ran out of Internet hours.

If Disney has tought me anything, you don't take fruits from creepy old people.

My immediate theory: Dat nigga dead. Girlfriend soon makes an account and updates us on further investigations.

Of course he took it. I knew he would eventually, so did Rose.

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Why in the world would you do that?

Also, please tell me that you at least got a fresh one and not some rotted piece of shit.

We've been bamboozled.

WHAT DO YOU MEAN YOU TOOK IT?!?!?!?!? YOU COULDN-- BUT WHY-- I WANT ANSWERS!!!!

Orange you guys excited to see if anything happens next?

He's going to start offering us all oranges ... One by one.

"Wha? There's no stor--"

-looks at OPs name-

"... oh gods no"

Dear OP,

I have to tell You a story, that might be very important. I love oranges. Really. I like simply eating them, I like drinking orange juice, I like it on cakes, hell, I even like their smell. This is why I always buy a bunch of them in the local store. However, every now and then someone breaks into my house only to steal some of them. Not so long ago I saw the thief escape - it was a woman in white. When she noticed I see her, she just turned around, smiled, laughed, and yelled "I'm stealing your oranges, BITCH! I'm giving them away, so you'll never find them. Looks like you need to buy more!". Then left laughing. I told my parents about it, and they said this crazy bitch's family has been stealing oranges from my family for generations. My great-grandmother had an argument with their family over an orange tree and they have been stealing our oranges ever since. The tradition goes from father to son, mother to daughter.

Now, if you'd be so kind. Would you PLEASE return my fucking oranges? Someone's trying to drink juice here...

COME ON! YOU HAD ONE JOB!

And theeeennnnnn?

It's been two hours and no story. He's dead.

Inaaace wut r u doin'?! Inaaace STAHP.

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It took me a while to figure what this story was about, but then I noticed the OP.

I hope he found peace at last.

Turns out to be a regular orange.

Directed by M Night Shamalamadingdong

Torn between wanting more answers and thinking that this is the perfect ending. I'm gonna go with perfect. Thank you, inaaace.

Did you at least mock her with the banana?

I feel bad for the suspense everyone here is going through so. UPVOTES EVERYWHERE!

JESUS CHRIST OP NO DO NOT DO THIS TO ME I AM LITERALLY CRYING NO GOOD BYE

I knew he would take it. Nobody can resist citrus fruits.

Update soon so we at least know your ok! We can't turn back time....he already took it....now we wait and see what happens.

did you punch her in the booby too?!

but actually, this is perfect.

I JUST GOT A FUCKING TEXT MESSAGE SAYING ROSE DIDN'T LIKE ME IGNORING HER AND TOLD ME TO CALL A NUMBER. FUCK EVERYTHING ABOUT THE TIMING OF ME SEEING THIS POST.

JESUS TAKE THE WHEEL I AM DONE

Time of death: approximately 4 PM on Tuesday, October 9th, 2012.

Rest in peace, OP.

I made an account just to comment. I've been following from the beginning. All I can say....DUDE WTF YOU TOOK IT?! ASDFGHJKL; goes slightly crazy Ugh that was perfect. I can't. Seriously.

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I bet the OP is now the old man and his GF has become Rose.

Also, you deserve to be october's winner.

I read this, then checked the author and went "OMFG WHAT NOOOOOOOOOOO."

Then I read all the comments and started laughing. WAY TO KILL THE MOOD, YOU GUYS.

YOU BASTARD!!!! You weren't supposed to take it!!!!

.......I hope you get fruit flies.

Well I'm glad you didn't take it on December 21st :)

This is like the "Jesus wept" verse of nosleep. So simple, yet so heavy.

It's been 2 weeks since he's posted anything. I fear the worst has happened.

His computer crashed.

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My heart just skipped a beat, but I need to know more! Has the curse been passed on to you? What happened?

DUDE. You had like, a HERD of ATL Redditors ready to . . . do whatever an army of Redditors do!

http://media.tumblr.com/tumblr_lk8j6qmj7K1qzu5wc.gif

So what happened next?

now give it back and continue with the story please ;)

YOU CAN'T END IT LIKE THIS! I NEED CLOSURE!

But... But you can't take it! You should've proved Rose wrong and have been all like, " AH HELL NAW, I AINT TAKIN NONE ORANGE" and then she like eats your face. Also, I am out of vodka.

The end of the world has begun.

OP! NOO!!!

I took it inaaace. = I took it in the ass... Goddammit OP you magnificent bastard. 10/10

Cheers to your survival...

Are you okay?? We'd love to hear the rest!

Oh, well. This is going to get rather messy, rather quickly. I'm glad all I have to deal with right now is a spider invasion in my home.

AND?!?!?!?!?!?!?!????????

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I TOOK IT, AND THREW IT ON THE GROOOOUND

I DONT NEED YOUR HANDOUTS

IM AN ADULT

PLEASE

SHOVE DAT GARBAGE IN ANOTHER MANS FACE

Probably tastes like shit. That is one old orange.

Turns out it's the annoying orange... "Hey Apple!"

SOMEBODY KNOWS WHAT HAPPENED

AND????? YOU CANT JUST LEAVE ME HANGIN LIKE THIS BRO

Literally 10 years later 💀💀

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Oh no you fucking didn't.

I guess there was really nothing to do but take the fucking orange. When death gives you oranges, you make orange juice.

He ragequit.

I require MORE. FEED ME. I AM HUNGRY FOR DISCLOSURE. FEEEED ME NOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWW!

Ok, so i went through this guys account overview (or whatever its called) and it appears he had taken a trip to montenegro a month agao. Who else beleives this could have triggered ...these events?

They are clearly terminators.

Gleaming white teeth, puppet/robotic like movements, no aging, voice changing, bullets and bombs no problem, Terminators.

They have clearly been coming back in time for many generations to ensure everything goes just right in your and your girlfriends family.

Maybe taking the orange will allow them to pull you through time. Or maybe it will pass on the knowledge you need.

Judgement Day is coming.

You. Sick. Bastard.

We want answers, dammit!!!

I cried because I saw the title, and I cried again when I read the story.

No mames...

God damn it. What an ending. Of course, I hope it isn't the end, but really...if you ended it right here I couldn't complain. Good show!

I was like: "what? What is this story i don't get it. looks at author username wait? Is that the guy that.... OH FUCK!!! THE FUCKING ORANGE!!!"

inaaace, you son of a bitch, you'd better get back here and give us an update! it just can't end like this!

NO. NO NO NO NO NO NO NO.

"The End"

Why won't it upvote...

WHERE IS THE REST OF THE STORY!!! YOU CAN'T LEAVE US HANGING LIKE THIS!!!!

maybe rose wrote this.

Orange you pissed OP ended the story like this?

You even built this account up, to abandon it for this. I'm impressed.

damn you OP

One does not simply say "I took it." And that is it...

Of course it would be a marketing ploy to get us to buy the fucking ebook. Asshole.

Okay, you posted this two hours before I saw it. I've been following this story from the beginning and have grown to worry about you. I hope that in these two hours you have been working on an update or are writing a novel with fewer cuss words that tells your full story. It is fantastic. But I hate cliffhangers. Please write an explanation! Please!

OH COME ON!

Soooo....did it taste good?

NOOO

Now end the world so I can believe you were the antichrist! that'll at least give me some fucking answers!

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Please tell us what's happening now. What did you say? What did she say? Does your girlfriend know? If so did she smack you upside your head, I would have :)? As Number Johnny 5 puts it, "Malfunction. Need input. Input! Need more Input!"

And then inaaace was the demons...

Hes still alive and possibily still 'himself' if he decided to post here, but the lack of further explanation suggests that there is something very wrong.

Guys, I don't think we're getting any updates on this one

ARE YOU DEAD DEAR GOD

OP posted!!!!!! just a video on another story... but OP is alive!!! I think...

OP is back! we want more! xo

This man is a master story teller. Unfortunately, this is not true. He is always posting creepy stories to nosleep. Will buy the book though.

Read the free transcript of the final.

Worst. Ending. Ever.

Fuck you OP.

Nooooooooooo!

Just 3 words and we have the probably best and biggest ending to one of the best stories this month. Wow. Thank you inaance for the adventure. Or is it the end? Who knows, I just hope he is well ...

Just go to stinson beach, there is something i need to show you.

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DUDE. this is my first time commenting on anything written by you.... WTF DUDE.

Explain how it went down please? Did she smply show up at your door? How did your girl react? What did Rose say?

Is the story over?

GGWP

OH MY GOD

shit shit shit shit shiiiiiit!

DETAILS, DAMMIT

Well now what!? You can't just say "I took it?" What the fuck happens now?!

.... I am freaking out!

This better not be the end.

OH FUCK. WHAT THE FUCK, MAN. NO. NO.

We'll never find out what happens NOW. :( He's now probably an orange ready to be given to someone else.

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All along the NOPE train...

What did Rose do after you took it? Did she just walk away or disappear?

Guys, he hasn't posted anything since yesterday. I'm scared and I'm not even in this situation. Please, be okay.

And then..... She turned you into one of The Gentlemen and forced you to steal hearts replacing them with oranges.... ???? I need to know what happened!

I fucking read this entire story at 2 AM yesterday morning. I finish it. I'm on edge because YOU TOOK IT THE FUCK. I'm paranoid all night about waking up and seeing oranges. I go to work. I go home. I go to school for night classes. I park. Get out of my car. There's a fucking ORANGE right in front of it. Needless to say, I took a picture and nobody understands.

Great story.

All of Inaaace's old submissions have been deleted, bar the 'Rose Saga'

http://i277.photobucket.com/albums/kk61/Soap-Bubble/GIFs/nope.gif

Hey buddy.....you still alive? I fucking hope so. Your story freaked me the fuck out

no more oranges for me for a while ;-;

WWHHYY!!!!

thats it??? hours of obsession and thats all you give us ????!!!!!!!!!!!!!! thats it im stalking you till you tell us what happend

"... And it was the best damn Orange I ever had. Thanks Rose! :D "

I was sitting there clicking everything on the freaking screen and then I realized.

This can only mean one thing: there is one more single woman in Atlanta, GA.

This is the best ending to any long story I've read on here.

Well that escalated quickly

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And orange you glad you did?

You did? Really? Oh goody.

Wait...you were supposed to wait until I was there to see it!

So you become one of them?

Tell me what happened.

nonononnononononono

well shit

No, no, no, no, no, no, no! ......... You're fucked. Ah well, I'll keep my fingers crossed for you..

nooooooooo :( I want to know what happens next.

I'm freaking out for you right now, man. Please let us know you're okay.

This makes me horribly sad. I hope you and your girlfriend are safe OP.

YOU CANT LEAVE ME HANGIN!!!!! WE WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENED!!!!!!!

I hope your girlfriend posts an epilogue soon.

nonononononono

WELL FUCK.

So what did you do with it after you took it?

I scrolled past this for hours before clicking... as it was loading, I had the "oh god it's that orange story" thought and then saw the user name. internal panic attack. amazing story. thank you.

man i invested too much time into this scary shit to not know what the hell the orange is going to do ? we must know.

We all knew he was going to take the orange, it was just a matter of time. I just wish we'd had a better update before he took it or at least had his gf upload one.

3 words and now I'm quite sad :( Hope you update soon OP.

Fricken awesome!! Been hooked since the first post, couldn't have thought of a better ending:))

Update on what happens?

You weak minded melon.

Then inacce became the orange

NO! I want answers! Somebody is getting freaking killed if I don't get something.

OP what are you doing? OP stahp!

:( I think inaaace is probably now a ghost frozen in time, learning how to offer people oranges in exchange for their eternal souls.

I like this ending, but here is the problem, how did you have the time to write this if you are dead, as so many redditors are suggesting.

Don't know whether to upvote because of the great series, or to downvote because its A) Over and B) DIDN'T TELL US WHAT THE FUCK HAPPENED!!!

DUDE!!!! You can't just leave us hanging like this! Please keep posting more if she didn't put the Orange in your bum and it was actually a giant spider egg sack that hatched and they now live in your intestines... Cuz I'm pretty sure you won't be posting for a while if that for some reason did happen...

If this is the end, let it be known you have spawned more than one individuals that now hold oranges and stare at people

I can't see the post...

Hold on, just making sure my computer isn't screwing up here, is there no story/extra text with this. Is it only "I took it." in the title?

slow clap What an ending!

Good story. Incredibly believable and really made me afraid of the dark for a while.

He's either dead, or having a riot laughing at our reactions.

PLEASE TELL ME IF YOU'RE ALIVE! WHAT HAS HAPPENED TO YOU!?

it's been 5 days and nothing from OP...hope everything's okay :S

I feel stupid asking this but someone help. I can't see his story? All I see is other peoples comments.

It's been one week WE NEED UPDATES!!! Tell us something! Let us know you are alive!

Oh my god. TEN FRICKIN DAYS WITH ABSO-FRICKIN-NOTHING FROM HIM?....

.... really wish there was more :(

COME ON OP RESPOND

How could he post " I took it" if he was dead?

You sucked me in. It's 3:43am right now and I just made it here. I'm dying for answers... I just need to know what happened and who or what Rose was.

Beautiful job. I hate you for doing this to me.

I'm probably two months late but... WHAT DID SHE DOOOOOO!!!!!!

Inaace appears to be alive still based on his reddit activity.

http://i.imgur.com/ymvAh.jpg

My brain just exploded...

You can't just fucking do that! Tell us what happens for fucks sake!!!

ahh he gave his sold to the demons nuuuhh

Really liked the story :) The ending is a bit unsatisfying for my taste, but you still did an ridicolously well job! My take on the ending would be instead of

I took it.

he took it.

Would've been a heavier impact on me. Glad you're putting this in a book, will buy for sure!

666 comments? NOPE

So I went on his kickstarter site and his book was funded on Feb 13... I wanted to cry... Wasn't that the date he got baptized?

what, thats it the whole ending is "i took it" ? i was expecting something like hitting rose over the head with a baseball bat with nails in it! :(

Oh my god. I just want to find out what happened!

God damnit I was hoping for another story. I'm all sad now. It was just getting interesting, oh well. New story now!

You shouldn't have

You fucker.

Honestly, to me this story felt like it was losing focus, and the author had no idea where he/she was taking it. The last one was so scrambled and full of contradictions it was disappointing - especially with how awesome the first 2 were. I guess if the last story had been better I might be more satisfied with this ending. Just my two cents.

Why do we need to pay to read the ending, the series is so gripping!!!

... Everyone has a tipping point I suppose. Rose- 1, Inaace - 0..range!!!!!!!

This creeps me out like the post from the girl and his dream boy Elijah :s

Aaaaaaand... 1000vultures just got kicked out of top spot for favorite /r/nosleep writer.

This is how I imagined Rose to be:

http://24.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_m7abumVcZf1raxs8co1_1280.png

is anyone else fucking annoyed that he decides to make us pay to finish reading this?

what a joke. 10 years of filler then you don't even have the decency to give us an ending without a pay wall. You're a genuine POS

...well then.

Noice!

WTF?!?!?!?!?

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Great end of the world... fuck

I can only think of this...

The red pill, or the blue pill?

Oh fuck...

NNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!

omfg I gasped so hard I think the neighbors heard me.

I don't understand.

GG

Well done, sir. Well done...

Cool story OP. Update soon, 'kay?

"Inaaace took the cookie from the cookie jar"

"Who me?"

"Yes you"

So she found him again. I knew it. I hope you ate it

This had me on the edge of my seat and constantly checking for updates. But I hope you and your girlfriend are okay. I hope taking the orange was the best choice; but my fear tells me otherwise.

Good luck on the days to come.

"A White Lady is a type of female ghost reportedly seen in rural areas and associated with some local legend of tragedy. White Lady legends are found around the world. Common to many of them is the theme of losing or being betrayed by a husband or fiancé. They are often associated with an individual family line or said to be a harbinger of death similar to a banshee."

Sto muka na nas Srbe! V :)

I was there.

I TRUSTED YOU!

WHAT THE FUCKING FUCK?! I NEEEED ANSWERS OGEOIAJJEF~!!!

What?! NOoooooooo!

Here is something interesting, last night I couldn't sleep and at around 3:00 AM it started smelling like oranges in my house until 4:15, then the smell disappeared.

A cliffhanger that will haunt me. Best of luck.

No, I took it. Fuck you.

Nooo!!!

Why didn't you write about it!!!!!!!

I think the affects of the orange have not taken place yet, it will probably take time, check up in your gf, how did she act after she GRABBED the orange? Considering she didn't know you then, has he ever just randomly acted weird? I can't believe no one really though about that, I mean she grabbed the orange and threw it at her and she's still alive (at least we think so). All I can say is good luck, you just went down a narrow one way road...and our reverse has been cut.

I just realized what this was. Damn. Took the orange and that's it.

Never before has a single statement sent chills down my spine like this one.

WHAAAT WHAT WHA WHAT WHAT WHY? WHY DID YOU DO THAT? THE END IS NIGH!!! DETAILS PLEASE

We've got to track down his girl now. Only she will be able to tell us what happened to him.

This story, terrifying and beautiful.

Good

I'm not sure if ending it with only three words was good or bad...

I wanna know more about this woman. I read all of OP's accounts, but...what the hell do I even Google to find more about her?

doubleyou-tee-eff. NO!!! What happened???

Well shit..

gahhhhhhh i wanna know more!!!!!!!! O.o

All Atlantans(Myself included), Please message /u/inaaace IMMEDIATELY.

It took me a minute to remember the situation, but I got and I can't stop freaking out.

Well, guess who isnt sleeping. Seriously PLEASE be okay!!

Holy raptor riding Jesus!!!

God dammit.

Soo..Uhhhh...Is OP dead??

well at least we know he's fine because he posted this.

DAMMIT MAN COMMENT, POST! ARE YOU ALIVE STILL!?!? :/ :(

O_O

Oh man, so good. Brought a dang tear to my eye.

Now what? I need details!

Well it's been nice knowing you all. I guess the apocalypse is coming early.

D: Oh my god, this is absolutely the best ending ever. I actually teared up slightly as I had genuinely got right into this! I immediately had thoughts of terrible, devastating things happening to him, hence why no more was said. Just perfect.

2 days and no update. It's safe to say that OP has been hurt in some way.

It's been three days....I'm both worried. about inaaace and what whas happened

Welp...It's hitting me now that he's not coming back. R.I.P inaaace.

I assume he is dead.........no posts or anything since he posted this. RIP OP :(

whaa?? :(

He's been gone for 5 days... Guys... They got him.

When is OP gonna update us? He's probably like dead now though :/

Has anyone heard from him at all?? :( this is not okay!

I never thought a story about an orange would be so terrifying good.

I think OP might be dead.

SHIT!

This is a GAD DANG SOPRANOS ENDING...........................................................................................................................dot..............

hi, i just read this whole thing (at 2 am - real smart) first concern - the pictures in update 3 didn't work at all, which is freaking me out more than i was. second concern - why did you take the orange when everyone told you not to? -_- i personally don't think you're dead, OP, but... i wish you had internet access so you could tell us what's going on.

since you had time to post about taking the orange, i'm guessing she didn't drag you to hell immediately.. i think this is just a good horror story.. excited to read more!

He hasn't updated in a while...I hope he's not dead! Wth was in that orange!?!?!

Come now.

Has anybody else noticed that he's deleted the rest of his submissions that aren't "Rose" related.

I'm beginning to think this has been turned into a throwaway account.

Hate to be a creepy stalker but I couldn't help but notice.

I am still wanting more from this story...

It is clearly evident OP is dead. He would not have taken to the time to post that he "took it" and not give the story behind it. Clearly someone hacked his account and posted on his behalf...

I hope you are still alive....maybe hiding somewhere away from Rose with your girlfriend which maybe is the reason why you arent updating but seeing your title...oh god. How a series of stories can give me such creeps when i see oranges.. I hope for the best, really.

OP is dead.... RIP OP.

Fuck, this suspense is too much.

oh my god... why have i read all your storys before i go to bed... please dont die

R.I.P. OP

Inaaace is back! Has recently commented on this post, his comment was deleted shortly after but this is what he commented, no words just a link. Any thoughts?

come motherfucker please write something to make us know that youo aint dead!!!!!!!!!!!!

Is that it? What happened? What made you decide to take it? What happened when you took it?

he died.

...you son of a beech....

But... OP, no... You couldn't have let her win! DAMMIT!

O.O Holy Crap

Hmmm read the entire story and I've gotta say I want to meet Rose... Is that odd?

Inaaace! Please come back oh why in the help did you take that damn orange?!

Spent most of my day reading this series on Rose. I'm hooked on all of your stories, inaaace!

wat

Баш ме интересира што од тоа штo го зема, брату...

You are going to die!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

TELL ME WHAT HAPPENED. TELL ME RIGHT NOW.

Not fair, man. Soooo not fair.

Witches < Shotguns and holy water. Remember that, in your next life.

how deep does this rabbit hole go?

And then what happened?

Feb 13th 1992 is Friday (Friday the 13th)

When you saw her on the bike trail, why didn't you sit down and ask her "What are you?" "Where were you born?" "Why do you want to give me and my girlfriend an orange so much and what is the catch", etc.

And bricks shall be shat tonight!!!

You son of a bitch.

So this is real old now but I think you should always bring along an orange and pull it out with a creepy grin and stare at her next time you see her.

Then to take her/yourself out of the moment, pull off your shorts and just start ruthlessly beatin on yer limp dick, then say "orange you glad i have my own now"

GODDAMMIT. THIS IS SUCH A GOOD ENDING BUT IT FRUSTRATES ME SO DAMN MUCH.

You motherfucker. I wait months to come back and read this and this is the ending you deliver? God damnit.

It's a good ending, I'll give you that... grumbles

Nice story, hope the book sells...

HOT DAMN! I STAYED UP TO FINISH READING THESE! I AM GONNA FIND YOU AND FEED YOU ORANGES.

I know this post is like a 100 days old but I'll be damned if I leave without an ending will someone please make one up for me!

buy a gun and shoot her

but..

:(

Oh, DAMNIT! I was reading the comments in here when some cats outside started fighting, making their cat-fight noises. Shit scared the crap outta me! LOL

annnnnnnnnnd deeeeeeeeeen?

I will never look at an orange in the same way!

I like to think that when he took the orange something like the end of 2001 a space odyseey happens where Dave Bowman goes inside and become one with the monolith. Something cosmic and crazy happens after he took the orange. Something we'll never understand. I like to think that at least.

Oh my fuck. I finally got to the end. I knew the end would reveal it was fake and im so glad i plowed through. I almost bitched out after the story with the goddamn pictures though. I havent been that fucking scared in years. Terrifying.

I MUST KNOW MORE perfect ending though

Damn inaaace, you scary.

In case you don't realize, he's leaving us in anticipation for the promised book!

I love it, the suspense is killing me!

Decided to finish the story while eating an orange. WHY U NO GIVE ME TIME TO EAT THE ORANGE?

FACKINGSHIT

Well damn. There goes my chances of sleeping tonight. Freaking oranges and their horrorific qualities

Just wow

Logic exception: Lila (or whatever her name was) took the orange once and threw it in "Rose"'s face. So nothing will happen ... except maybe she'll ask you to peel it for her?!

The thing about him logging in, it may be his girlfriend logging in. Possibly. Maybe. Probably.

So how can I read it?? I can't see the story, only comments :(

I took it? That's it? What happened Milos? You dead? Making the story dramatic? Tell me when you are gonna continue righting in heaven if you're dead okay? Thx.

I about shit my pants, superb writing sir.

...Aaaand, this is why you SHOULD NOT leave the internet for even a moment.

awww yeah

I was glued to my computer for the last hour, re-reading all the creepy details, looking up allusions to cultural icons, and kind of tripping out about creepy ass people bearing fruit. And then I get here. It was an amazing story, if somebody would have offered me a fruit or come to my door looking anything like you described these "people" (broad daylight by the way) I probably would have shit my pants. The ending just kind of eh. Anybody out there know if the book ends any better? Don't tell me what happens, just a yes or no will work. Anyway, thanks for the story.

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Wtf, why is this story deleted, can anybody, who knows why it deleted and is still here told me, and of you know the story please tell me,. Why op, why did you delete this particular, last part.

INAAACE HIGH AS FUCK.

TAKING ORANGES FROM OLD LADIES N SHIT.

mfw inaaace gf told him he shouldn't reddit anymore mfw inaaace deceided to go out in style :)

Well you're okay enough to post on Reddit... you're okay enough to tell us... what the fuck is up?! Where'd you see rose again?! I NEED TO KNOW

Oh fuck you. You are the worst kind of person....but thanks for the details on your amazing story, really enjoyed reading.

CAN SOMEONE PLEASE CLEAR THE AIR FOR ME??

You guys, seriously.... if he's able to get onto reddit and TELL US this, he's alive and nothing catastrophic happened or he'd be reaping karma from the story.

OP, I used to love your story and was so intrigued. But you, sir, are an asshole! giving all of r/nosleep a pixellated middle finger by not posting a story....

well this was a waste of time

So if anything, this was a marketing ploy. Has anyone bought the book? Apparently that has the ending and answers some questions.

Fuck you.

WHY MAN WHY? God protect u!

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AND?

NoOoOoOoOo!!!!!

I guess that works, would have been happier if you told her something like "Shut your whore mouth Shannon!"

Welp, there goes any chance I had of sleeping tonight.

They usually appear after some time in between each appearance, yet this time they appeared pretty fast after you said you would take the orange...which means they know ur activity on reddit!

anyways, 3 words and so much karma! thats pretty awesome imo haha

GODAMNIT OP!!! YOU DO NOT TAKE THE FUCKING ORANGE YOU DO NOT TAKE THE FUCKING ORANGE

But seriously I really hope you are ok

Well this was.... not what I was expecting. :/

Sigh.

Where did the story go? :( :(

Why can I not read it?!

i cant see story?!?!?!

what happened after he took it. Did it just stop. Was this all fake and he just got writers block. What happened i want to know. Did everything just stop. He went from writing stories in one post to three f-ing words. I hope the book has a better ending. God... I hope it does. If not this is the biggest cliffhanger in the history of cliffhangers. You enjoy that orange, enjoy the money from your book sales, but know this you have disappointed alot of people. What if this was happening to someone else and they were reading your story to see what to do. I hate cliffhangers :( By the by I'm not mad just disappointed. This was a great read until... This.

Thats it?!?!? Mothafucka thats it!??!

is there a free 2 read online version of the ending?

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Let's see how quickly this gets commented on....

We don't know what the OP took, but we know where it was taken....

fuck, no, no, NO, INAAACE, NO!

OP. NO.

I'm sad that this is over. :'(

He took.... The orange....

OP needs to update us.

Hello. Noob with Boobs here. I wanted to let you know that i just signed up for Reddit - JUST so i could comment on your story. Bravo Sir. Well done indeed. Where is Harry Dresden when you need him? I have been captivated by your story for days. I stared at your pictures and did research for hours. To me, it looks like the first word on the Orange Peel is "Porjde". I was only able to find this word used in old british litterature and science books from the 1800's. Every time it was used to describe something as "Rosey". Ironic? Hmm... anyways. I hope you are all ok. Everyone feel free to contact me (: i could use some Reddit friends now that i'm on here. Plus im a big gamer if you wanna trade gamertags. <3CheersWorld

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My Dick just fell of and started dancing.......... More please

I'm sorry. But was this edited? Or is it meant to be just the title?

Terrified Fucking terrified. Lights are all on. never sleeping again. fuck.

WHAT WAS IT

so, he's either dead or this story was bullshit, and i hope it's neither of those, but i'm sure it is anyway...

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO no no no no no!!!

AND?!

WHAT HAPPENED

what? thats the end? i wanna know what happened at the last encounter to make you take it. I understand not wanting to be tortured anymore, but you've filled us in this much all ready. At least tell us what happened?

And....

Seriously, if that's the end, this is the worst story ever.

Mothafucker. Great story too. But FFUUCCKKK the ending.

Okay, what happened?

ugh. that's not an end. what happened when you took it? that's terrible.

this nigga

THEN WHAT?!?!

Dude seriously? You're ending an awesome story like this?... I, I am so angry right now. I hate you!

OP. You better give us some answers. Nao. Please? Look what you've done, we're desperate to know!

Well what the fuck?

Let down

Was the story taken down?

This was pretty anti climactic. I was expecting done big reveal or shock at the end. Nope. Now I just wasted an hour of my life.

mmm, if this IS in fact real, lets say this was happening to you, and you have been writing huge amounts of text explaining your circumstance, would you end it like this? Leaving out the most monumental details in the whole story? This makes me think he did this for literary intrigue and suspense, leading me to think this is fake.

where is the last part of the story i click on this one but no story comes out !! IM DYING TO KNOW THE LAST PART WHERE IS IT !!!!??!!!

wwtf ic ant see the goddamn story!?@?#$#@!$^

How do I read it?

       - Noob to Reddit

Im new to reddit where is the story/

I cant read it :<

Soo... You took it then what happens?

i took it is that really it?

i took it....and ill leave you guys with nothing to go on

oh wait UPDATE! i got it turned into book

IT WONT LET ME READ IT.

How do i see the story?

what happened after you took it you can't just say you took it without telling us I have to KNOW! I WANT TO KNOW NOW! OR ELSE I WILL HUNT YOU DOWN AND SHOVE A BANANA DOWN YOUR THROAT!

really O_o I is disappoint

Some people may be hating on this and saying it is fake, but I believe you. I'm not just saying that, just because it sounds so incredible, doesn't mean it's fake. :)

I don't get it, is he trying to say we have to buy the book to know the ending?

OP How dare you do this to me!!!? Arghhhhh.

it wont let me look at the story -.-

i cant readit

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He took something of theirs. They take him. They hide him, and leave no traces of break-in or struggle. His family goes crazy. His friends drink at the bar they go to every Friday night, trying to figure out what had happened. His girlfriend secretly cries in her mind, the tears uncontrollable. One runs down her cheek, no one notices.

They continue to torture him. They try to find it, but it is nowhere to be found. He keeps the hiding spot safe. They move around, running away from the police. The police begin to give up. The family cries and begins to make funeral plans when the police tell them the case has run cold. His friends yell and curse at the police, not wanting to give up. His girlfriend feels that he is still out there. She steps up. She gives a speech about how they can't give up. They have to look at every detail. She and the friends band together their own search and rescue team.

They continue to torture him. He begins to think about his girlfriend. He thinks about her beautiful face, her skin, her body. He can't control himself. But something clicks inside his mind. The hiding spot. The torture actually ripped the hiding spot from his mind, but now it's back. She has it, and she's in danger.

The face in front of him is one of his friends. He realizes his face had shown his remembrance. The traitor laughs and asks him one more time where it is. He agrees to take them to it.

He leads them to the hiding spot. The search team the friends made were there. They were astonished to see him with them. The friends fight the 20-30 that joined the traitor and him. He fights the traitor. He is beat up and not doing so well. Seeing him made his girlfriend fight hard. She got through, and saw that he was having trouble fighting the traitor. She helped him, and they both took him down. They called the police, and the traitor and his accomplices were arrested.

The friends rejoice in having him back. He and his girlfriend kiss. However, during all the partying, he hears a voice. The voice whispers inside his mind, and his mind only. I know you still have it. I will come for you and her. I will get it back one way or another. The voice is Rose's. He looks down at his girlfriend, the love of his life. He frowns and promises himself she will not get hurt. She looks up at him and sees something is wrong, but he pushes away the subject. He sneaks into her bedroom and finds it. He sticks it in his pocket, thinking about a new hiding spot.

He goes back to the party without anyone knowing what really is going on. His friends just think that they only took him for money. He tries to keep it that way.

Now he can only wait.

As he walks out of the room, he smells oranges, and feels something outside the window on the balcony. He runs back to the party, unable to find his girlfriend. He finds an orange slice where he left her. He picks it up, and takes the other out of his pocket. He then takes a bite from each, and his mind slips away......

Well this sounds fake now since he provided no info :/

I stayed up until 5 in the morning for this shit? -.-'

This is the best marketing ploy that I have ever seen. Damn, what a brilliant way to sell a book

2 weeks and no update. I'm out.

Did you atleast pound Rose?

Dick move OP -.- don't leave us hanging!!!!!D:

Well that's ambiguous

Obviously he isn't dead if he managed to post the words.

Any word on OP?

what the fuck? this is it? no more?!

awesome story if that is not the ending...

BOOOOOOOOOOO!

What happened

This happened because you fapped to her. Im done with fapping. Im done for life.

Make some orange juice with that shit.. Bitches love orange juice.

Thought stories here were supposed to be real, this has turned into BS.

Since he took it, now she'll move on to some one else... It could be anyone... Mother of God.

Dick.

FUCK YOU!!! FUCK THE HELL OUTTA YOU, I WANT TO KNOW HOW IT ENDS!!

Omfg that was so great... so great... fuck you... fuck rose... glad I'm allergic to oranges anyway.

So in order to finish the story I have to buy the book?

 >.> 

So, that is the end of the story?

I call bullshit.

it wont let me read it?

Come on he had us from the start, it was all to make us buy the book and it be a bad ending just like Lucas did with star wars . The story had plot holes with dates, wars, bombings , police.

What? No. Okay, I seriously NEED to know more than just THREE LITTLE WORDS. Please?

I'm sorry, this story is completely overrated.

so what happened?

i cant see tge story

Why cant l read his mang??

Wait, then what happened?!

WHAT HAPPENED THOUGH?

Lol I sat here for ten minutes trying to figure out how to open the story...

How do you read this shit!! I can't find the ending anywhere... all I see is the title and these comments ;3;

How do u read it?

?!?!?!?!?!?!?!

How come I am not able to read this?

hahahah I was sat here for about half an hour trying to figure out how to read it...

Anyway, WHAT HAPPENED?!

are you fucking kidding me? that's it? that's the fucking end?!

wait, that's the ending? i took it?

literally what the fuck this ending made me so mad WHAT HAPPENED

Orange, scary huh, no?, have you read that story?

why can't I go to the link?

I'm going to sound like an idiot, but what the bloody hell did he take?!?!

Sorry if someone has already said this, but it's still a better ending than ME3

EDIT: Plus I think we've all been trolled.

Where is this story??

Dude, you need to update. Or your girlfriend. We NEED to know what's going on!

Logically I knew this story was fake but I'm actually pretty shitty that its not real. Wtf, OP, wtf. shakes fist

how does this have so many upvotes, it's just three words that could be about anything

I find it funny that 3 words for a title, without any other information by this person has over 430 upvotes... I already know what it is about, but if I posted it I'd be lucky to even get 1 upvote...

Oh god, I think I found Rose...

So what happened?

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This guy...

Anyone else want to find him in Atlanta?

Everytime i try reading the story it just takes me to the comment page? Am i missing something here?

Get like a casaba melon or something and just keep trying to give it to her and copy her weird shit. Try to psych them out lmao

I don’t get why people keep pointing out the name.