always take the phone with you, never leave home without it.

You should have smacked her. She's making me angry, too.

Wonder what would happen if you didn't humor her? You know, she offers you an orange and you say "No thanks i prefer plums, got any?" I don't know something like that. Might piss her off, might do nothing, still better than being a nervous wreck.

Listen to me.. Offer her an orange and ask her to come with you, if she agrees take her to the police station if she doesn't laugh and walk away..this is exactly how you deal with psychopaths you fuck with their already fucked mind

Maybe its just a really fucking tasty orange.

By "your priest", I am betting she means the one that refused you baptism for your own safety. I think it is time you finally tell us the complete story regarding that.

At this point, I feel like the strange story you mentioned about your baptism must be relevant (you should share it if you have the time/energy). Maybe she means that you should ask that specific priest?

Very interesting encounter. I'm glad to hear you were able to build up the courage and ask her stuff. Some of the things I found interesting is her use of "we're" implying she is not alone. Maybe a cult?organization? species? I feel like ruling out demonic might be premature but typically they travel lonewolf style right? Also you can clearly see as long as you never lay a hand on her she can't to you, because if she was going to it would have been there where you were all alone for the taking. I think this might stem older than your grandma also she might have been a victim just like you. If I could give you any suggestions it's this so far: - You're getting braver so when ever you encounter her OR the man in the suit ask them questions they can't touch you she said it herself you need to agree to go with her. Continue to NEVER LAY A HAND ON EITHER OF THEM and never take the orange. -You're going to have to do some research find old cultures where an orange is symbolic, maybe cultures close to your home country, but use the clues you have now to build a picture; its a group of people who are looking for you to "come with them" by accepting an orange. They seem to not be bound to geographical location or time since your grandma has met them and they knew about you, your girlfriend, and they seem to be ageless. -dig into your family's past maybe your great great grand parents pissed of a witch? Lastly good luck this would creep the shit out of me if I were you. Stay strong! Reddit is behind you!

Go to the nearest church. Stay there, most have a place you can spend the night... take your girlfriend, and go where it's safe and there are people with whom you can talk about this.

If this is true, then you have the support of the entire nosleep community behind you. We're all worried about you and want the best for you.

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well, i think this is the problem....

Am I the only one who wants you to try and calmly ask her to elaborate? Could you at least ask her some specific questions about what they are, what taking the orange represents/what the consequences are, and why they are targeting your family and Lila's family specificly?

I get that it's tough, but you are getting nowhere at this rate.

"You think your friends can help?”

Is it possible that she's also talking about us here? It's pretty clear that they know quite a lot about your lives...

I must commend you, both for your bravery and this epic fucking tale that you have told us all! I tune in every fucking half hour to see if you update! Keep us posted! Anyways, good luck! I'm craving orange juice now! Cheers!

Honestly, that descriptive writing style people were bugging you about is fucking lame. Its exactly when I see things like “her hair was shinning on the moonlight almost like the ocean just before sunset” that I stop reading a story and I know it was "written" as opposed to recounted like this one. And its exactly this style that is good.

You're telling us what happened as opposed to blatantly coming up with something.

I hope all you other nosleep authors see this and keep this in mind.

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I really gotta stop clicking 'round these parts at night...

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I seriously get on here every day to see if you posted a new story and it definitely has me freaked out O_O good luck to you man!

OP, I have a serious question. How does it make you feel knowing you masturbated to the thought of Rose as a youngling?

Pro tip for phones and rainy weather, zip lock bag!

H'okay. Simplified, what you have here is a group of at least two people, both intent on getting yourself and your girlfriend to accept fruit. While they're insistent (to the point of harassment), both seem perfectly happy to wait for you do so of your own accord. In fact, you could say they NEED you to take the orange willingly. They cannot force you here. And as of reading this most recent update, they also seem not to be terribly open as to why they want you to take the orange. Hence the heavy-handed hint about visiting your priest. My bet is that they want you to find out, yet cannot tell you themselves. Enlighten us to the details of your cancelled baptism, and we may be able to offer more advice. In the meantime, consider the fact that, as terrifying/annoying as their visitations may be, they do not currently have any power over you.

I truly believe you are dealing with a force or being far more powerful than any law enforcement agency can help you with. At some point I feel they're going to think you're some crazy idiot who has nothing better to do with his time. I know you say you don't believe in supernatural, but this is HEAVY and nothing a human OR multiple humans could pull off. I believe YOU but I do not think for one single second that this is a cult. Cults are weird and messed up, but they are human and can't do the things that you've been experiencing.

I beg you, go to a church. Print out all of your posts. It's easier to read your story at this point rather that verbally retell.

Please continue to update. On the off chance this story isn't real, I still commend you because if it were to be fictional it'd make a great short story or novel.

YOU COULDVE DITCHED YOUR BIKE YOU TARD.

I'm no doctor, but in Norse and Greek mythologies, "golden apples" were synonymous with oranges. These fruits were a symbol of immortality.

However, there was a lot of trouble caused in these mythologies by the taking and awarding of golden apples.

Maybe that's a clue?

Guys. Where is OP? It's Friday night and his last post got cut off mid sentence, over 10 hours ago. Don't you think that's kinda strange? Check his last comment and you'll see what I mean.

why couldn't it have been a fruit no one likes? like an artichoke? But now whenever i see or smell an orange i'm ready for shit to go down. Like our locker room was cleaned with an orange scented cleaner, and i was fucking shitting bricks.

Anything to do with kids, even their voices and laughs, are creepy as shit.

Maybe all those times she was at your house when you were younger maybe each time she stole and item, and that's why she had all those things?

worst-case scenario would be I am offered another fucking orange.

LOL

Op you know what you do? Grab your own orange, the next time you see her slowly peel it take off your pants start masturbating while eating the orange. Be sure not to take your eyes off her though.

I love the comments section on this subreddit. No matter how creeped out I get by a story, it can always be counteracted by a good laugh from reading the comments. It's like jumping from a cold pool into a hot tub.

Fuck everything about this. Best of luck, man.

I'm a huge Dune nerd, so forgive me that, but every time I read these I'm reminded of the Bene Gesserit's quest to breed the Kwizatz Haderach.

OP, it sounds like who/whatever this woman is, she's part of a group that's been expecting you, far longer than you've been alive. And it sounds like the fact that you exist is some kind of "goal" for this group.

Perhaps, given all the fertility overtones and the fact that she's appeared to your girlfriend too, your offspring (with your girlfriend) is valuable to them for some reason.

She gave you a lead - you NEED to talk to the priest from the baptism story. You NEED to tell us that story because we can be objective and offer suggestions, see things you don't or can't see.

So far, Rose and her male cohort have posed you no danger. They're just trying to get you to take this orange. I know it's creepy, but they don't appear to be a threat just yet. You should take her advice for now, talk to the priest. My bet is, he knows something.

My bet is also that your mother knows more than she's letting on, same with your grandmother. Probe there again, too. But my point is, at this point, Rose & Co have not endangered you, so you should remember that and do research. My guess is this will escalate, and when it does, preparation and knowledge is going to be everything.

God for some strange reason whenever I read Rose I think of the creepy stalker Rose from two and a half men. She fits the profile.

good thing you didn't bring that new iphone 5 with u

Ask your priest! And then update!!

I still recommend 12-gauge with water rounds. Although beanbag and taser rounds are also an option

Evidently, running is never going to keep you safe. You need to find out about them. She said ask a priest, but what do you ask them? about a strange woman holding an orange? Not aging?

The only thing I can honestly say is that you and your girlfriend need to stick together. You don't know the lengths this woman will go to to have you join her wherever she wants to go.

Just finished reading all of this. This is scary shit man, I don't think it's a cult because it isn't physically possible to do all the shit they do without you noticing them. Did you tell anyone you were going on a bike ride?

Am I the only one here who finds it strange that the OP doesn't think that the cancellation of his baptism is not relevant to these events?

I wonder what would happen if you came with a banana and started mocking her...

My suggestion, ask them why they want YOU and not someone else. I don't know how it would help but you'd know a little more about them at least.

OP is not coming back, is he?

Damn white people always make me read shit...

A lot of people are suggesting you punch these entities or otherwise attack them. I urge you to not take this advice. While I will grant you that the vast majority of the feats performed by these entities are possible (if not extremely difficult) for a human being, I think it's time we address the elephant in the room: they do not age. In no encounter with any of you have you, your girlfriend, or your grandma noticed any discernible effect of aging after decades.

Decades. It is safe to assume these are very likely not human beings, and if they are, they are not like any other human beings you have encountered. That should frighten you, but it is valuable information. Most importantly, remember that these are entities with capabilities you do not know or understand. No one can predict what the response will be if you sock one of them, but there is every possibility it will be ineffective and perhaps even antagonize them.

So play it cool. Do not escalate things with an entity you do not understand. Now, on to what I would advise.

1) You need information. You cannot intelligently make any decisions without more information. Search family histories, grab as many relatives and ask them, look through old journals or records. This is most definitely tied to your family, and probably your girlfriend's family as well. And Rose said herself this had been going on a very long time. Find out just how long.

2) Forget churches. Rose said herself that gods cannot save you, and all evidence to the affirmative. It'll be a waste of time at best, and it might piss them off at worst.

3) Your "priest" may be the priest who baptized you (or refused to). This is worth looking into. However, you don't strike me as a particularly religious man, leading me to believe you have no dedicated priest. She may mean "priest" figuratively. Do you have a mentor or close confidante that you go to for advice?

4) These things were focused on your grandparents and parents. If I'm reading this correctly, your relatives ceased contact with them shortly after you both were born. This is important. Rose and the others are jumping through the generations, trying each one until they get a hit. And now two such people have come together in a relationship? That's important. Perhaps not good, though.

5) Call your girlfriend. Now. If Rose contacted you, where do you think the man in the suit is off to?

What if you're the chosen one? Take the orange.

You might have answered this and I forgot from your other story... but how did your mom and Rose meet? I mean, that has to be important. It seemed like they were pretty good friends or something, and then this random shit starts happening. I mean you saw her before the weird stuff started, right? You said you fapped to her and stuff, so you must have know her at least a little. Just thinking that the way they met or where might be kind of helpful to know, but I don't believe I have seen this mentioned yet in the comments from you or suggested by anyone.

Edit: also, i didn't read yet when I commented, but I started reading and yeah, I like the way you write this. It is nice to read. I hate when people on here use flowery writing. It makes is all seem so contrived.

I just read all five of your posts. You mention your baptism in the very first one but don't really elaborate on it. You say you weren't allowed to enter and that many stories followed. You feel it is important to bring it up repeatedly throughout your tale, but only enough to say that you don't think it's important enough to share. I feel it's time for you to share the full story of that situation.

If you want art, read 100Vultures’ shit, that motherfucker can write.

Good man!

You may not be writing for entertainment, but I am certainly entertained. I very much want to tell you to go with her, but then I'm afraid your updates will stop.

The only thing that made me happy in this story was the iron maiden shirt \m/ but seriously dude, this is some of the most unsettling shit I've ever read. I hope you make it out of this man

Don't give up, because that's when you give in to whatever the fuck it is she wants from you. Keep fighting! Otherwise they'll win.

Hey OP. You still out there?

I would have beat the shit out of her

WHY. THE. FUCK. DO. I. KEEP. DOING. THIS. TO. MYSELF.

You left the Iron Maiden shirt? There's your mistake.

Is this Rose?

Where are you from? I mean, where in Bosnia you used to live. There's a lot of superstition around these parts. Maybe that could help to investigate things a bit further.

Take some salt and dump it on them o3o or like holy water.

She sounds nice, ask her if she's single and if immortality is a part of the deal. Since she hasn't aged.

Next time you encounter her like this (and like a poster said, always bring your phone), snap a picture of her. In many traditions that is a method of trapping a soul.

Fuck man, just read the entire series.

FUCK ORANGES.

Seriously creepy as hell.

Maybe Rose just needs a juicer? Is orange juice safe?

Just take the orange, eat the orange, say "thanks Rose"... walk away. END

Dude, the second I saw the title of this story on the front page of r/nosleep, I got so fucking pissed on your behalf -- I'm not generally a violent person but I desperately wanted to jump on Rose and beat the shit out of her, just so you can have some peace. I don't know what advice to give you other than there's at least one person out here, willing her to fuck off in a big way. I'm sure there are others pulling for you too!

Being ageless and capable of conjuring objects that are part of deep, nearly forgotten memories i think would HAVE to mean that they're some kind of unknown beings of legend. Mythology is ripe with tricksters who would either help or maliciously antagonize people for the fun of it. I think you should try looking deeper into both of your families' bloodlines. Maybe there's some crazy bit of fate between you two linking you to something bigger than Rose or the man in the suit. They're attractive and clean, they can contort their bodies, they can travel and fill even hardened people with overwhelming fear. And the whole asking your priest thing? IMHO, and totally sorry to say. I think they're mid-class demons.

So. What someone needs to do is trace the IP from where he sent these. Then post the general city/town that he had posted this from. Whoever is close by, you go and contact the police. Give them the description from the stories so far: about 6'2" (assumed, basketball player), average weight, Bosnian, girlfriend from Canada, etc etc. Anything that you can get from the stories, send it to them. Then, if the story is real, then the police should have a case file on them, so he would have done as he said, and if him and his girlfriend are missing, then file a missing persons report. They'd have his and her name on file, so they probably would also have characteristics on them.

WE MUST HELP OP!!!

I just realized im eating some fucking oranges while reading this by total coincidence holy fuck

What I don't understand, granted I have never been in a situation so far in my life that I have been paralyzed with fear, is why you do not punch her in her smiling fucking face. I mean at least take a swing. Worst case scenario she does some weird movie type stuff and then you know that you are dealing with something not human. Best case scenario you knock her the fuck out and then carry her body to the police. It is also obvious to me that if you do try to attack her, chances are she won't do anything back to you since she is trying to recruit you for something and if she hurt you in any way, you would not be inclined to join her at all, not that you are in the first place.

Look man we all want to help you but at some point you have to help yourself. Going for a bike ride in the woods, at night, alone? With no one knowing where you are? You cannot afford to take any risks right now man. None of us have ANY IDEA what this woman and her group's plans are. She could have had 12 huge guys rip you apart right there and that would have been it. You need to be more careful. Stay in city limits, in populated areas. You probably have no experience with dealing with stalker(s) but this group has obviously done this before. You need to keep your loved ones close to you so you can protect them. Obviously they know pretty much everything about you so what if she says "Come with me or I'll kill your mom?" think ahead, man. You're smarter than this. You can fight this.

Look, as creepy as she may seem, she's a PERSON. she's not a ghost or a vampire or a werewolf or an alien. She is a human being. She bleeds red, just like you and me. Next time you get the chance, you need to put her down. Maybe she's the leader of this group and if you kill her it all unravels? Cut the head off the snake? Obviously the police are not going to help you until she puts hands on you and by then it'll be too late. Fuck the police, fuck the judicial system. This is blood for blood now, street justice. Buy a gun and put a bullet in the head of anyone who threatens you or those you care about. This needs to end. Best of luck, brother. You're in my thoughts. Be strong

If you want art, read 100Vultures’ shit, that motherfucker can write.

I'm flattered.

i know its a long shot but maybe going to a church (or a few) and asking about her might yield something? It seems as though she was confident a priest would know about her. May bring to light some new info

I find it interesting that she used the word priest. Does you family have a religious background like having a long history of being Catholic?

I wonder if it is something mentioned in some Judeo-Christian text somewhere. Please update us about your baptism and you should call your priest to see if he has some kind of insight I am missing. There might be certain things you can do if it is somehow related to your religion. This kind of stuff brings me back to my days when I used to research this kind of thing heavily and hopefully I will be of some help.

What did you end up doing with the orange from the break-in?

I think your best shot at figuring this out is actually going back to your hometown. It probably has more answers to give you than where you live at the moment.

I'd look into that baptism story of yours, try to know more about it. Maybe something was wrong with you back then and the Priest who was there at the time can offer some explanation.

Just take the orange next time, then stomp on it hard as you can, walk away without saying a word....Or just ignoring her, I know it sounds stupid but really ignore her. See her in the street? Walk right on by without even a glance, pretend she doesn't exist and don't say a word.

Don't pay attention to the readers that whine about your writing style -- they have creepypasta to wallow in. Those of us that come here for real stories appreciate you and your tale as it unfurls.

What is it that causes the fear? Do you think you'd be incapable of daring to physically harm this woman?

Can I have the rights of this for a YouTube movie?

The Orange Cult is a bunch of souvenir collectors.

I will never be able to enjoy a walk on the local trail ever again.

Does anyone have any idea what this thing is?, doesn't resemble any creature from any lore I've read so far. I suppose it could be a demon, but demons don't offer a fucking orange. Also, demons can't do shit physically so there's that, they can't touch you unless you allow them to, for some fucking reason.

What scares me the most about Rose is that she seems to be oomniscient. She knows what your past is and she knows what you're doing...which means that she most likely knows you're writing these stories and getting advice from people. I think i know where you are actually because the weather you described was the same as my area

going for a bike ride while a crazy bitch is following you..... man.. you must really love to work out.

Look if Rose is giving your problems, you should talk with Lily from "the midnight shift." Maybe her ghost friends know something about this? Wouldn't hurt to ask

I've have been reading all of your stories and in fact do believe you that this is happened. I as well consider myself a person of reason and logic to quote Spock because I'm a nerd like that.. " If you eliminate the impossible, whatever remains, however improbable, must be the truth.".. you need to consider the fact that you might be facing something you don't believe in i.e demons or what have you. I've read almost all the comments and with all that has gone on how can you not logically see this is not some weird cult messing with you. We really need that baptism story ASAP! They way she asked if you would go to a church and said "gods" not god leads me to think ancient evil, the kinda that going to a church wont help any. I can agree never touch them or the orange. I would dig into your family history you may have someone who for lack of better words 'made a deal with the devil' and you are having to pay for that deal. I could probably write a longer post with ideas and suggestions but I will spare everyone else my rambling. Inclusion, don't go anywhere alone, don't touch her or the orange ever, and always carry a phone camera or something i don't care if you are going into the ocean they make waterproof stuff.. and as always stay safe and keep us updated

"Your friends can't help you..."

Does she mean us? I mean, we've been trying to help OP fight this bitch off and some of us have even had some strange encounters with people resembling her. If anything we should be brainstorming more now, we are all marked targets if what I assume is true and by what OP describes these entities are harnessing more and more power...

My advice be armed at all times, since guns are out of the question carry a small kitchen knife or some sort of blade for close combat. Also, do like most other users suggested, have a buddy system since its obvious they hold less influence/power over you and your GF. BE safe man, this thing whatever the hell it is wants you...

It's all smoke and mirrors with a dash of barnum effect, theres no such thing as deamons and spirits...

worse case scenario: Aliens.

If this was happening to me, I would be eating xanax by the handful.

I think you should talk to your mother, and ask her to try and remember more about Rose. I keep feeling like there's something she's forgetting, or missing, from those days you talked about when she would visit. Maybe that is how Rose got a lot of your personal items, too? Obviously she became "friends" with your mother to get close to you. I think your mom may know something, even if she doesn't know it yet. Do talk to a priest, too, any priest you know.

Man, if she can find your dead cat 12 years later, you might want to suspect something supernatural. That's just a really strong opinion from somebody who is mainly anonymous. Take it with a grain of salt.

I commented last night right after OP posted the latest on Rose. Since she hasn't shown any signs of aggression (just really really really creepy stuff), I wonder what would happen if the next time there is an encounter to try and actually talk to her civilly. There is clearly a reason why she and the man are involved in different aspects of your family, but I think it's important to find out as much info as you can about who SHE is. Your family, as well as your girlfriends family are clearly important to these "people."

Please don't consider yourself a broken man. Yeah, this is some f*cked up nonsense, but the stronger you stay the better you'll pull through. We are all thinking about you, and you have thousands of people from around the world who are invested in this with you. YOU ARE NOT ALONE. If anybody can help, it's Reddit. We will get to the bottom of this.

I'm not sure about any demons, but they may be extraterrestial beings. You should wear a small camera on your person in case of another encounter. That would be the greatest proof of all time.

Does she have an apple too? because if she does. She could be pulling a matrix pill moment on you

Its totally strange how she said ask your priest but she was even appearing in front of your grand-mother. This story definitely has some deep set ugly roots...

Dude, This really sucks, I have no idea how you're handling this, I can't help but think about how much this messing with your life, I hope everything gets better.

Rose reminds me of Linda in Evil Dead when she does the smile/child's voice/head tilt. Yikes.

What was the appearance of the dead cat? If it still had flesh and fur and you could make out it was a cat it probably isn't your from twelve years ago. For if its was it would be skeletalized. I hope you find the priest.

;______; ever since I started following these updates.. Any fucking time I see someone with an orange, or just an orange for that matter I flip the fuck out. Ahhggg!!!!!

Anything new? Would love to hear an update as soon as you're able to let us know! Hope everything has been okay

I can't believe it took me this long to realize. They have returned. No one is safe. Don't retaliate. Don't take the orange. We still aren't sure what they are capable of. They are NOT human. That is all I can say in a place as insecure as the internet.

This is his latest post. I was just trying to check in and make sure he's okay since nothing has been said for two days. Not meaning to rush him or anything like that, just the story is creepy and hoping for the best.

So was the GI Joe just random then? Or is there some connection there too? And yeah, going through something like this tends to feel like a bad horror movie Still, I'm sure eventually you'll find all the answers you're looking for.

+1 for that beautifully written opening. Had to comment before I went on with reading the actual story. Ok, here we go...

So I read this, and then I found orange juice in my fridge. My parents almost never buy orange juice. I am frightened.

Why didn't you just punch her in the face? I know I would, like 3 stories ago.

After I read the first paragraph of this, I decided I was hungry. I went to the refrigerator. I open it? RANDOM FUCKING ORANGE SITTING ON THE FUCKING SHELF.

Scared shitless.

Reading this story just the night before Chinese new year is scary as fuck, oranges every where yo.

Congrats on finding Rose again. Let me know if you find The Doctor, I've been meaning to hitch a ride on the TARDIS.

Maybe the priest she is talking about is the one that was from your childhood?

Time does not work like this in other realms, maybe she is just taking the short path, by that i mean that she can travel through time and space. Other dimensions hold things we can't even comprehend, and i mean, really, our brains cannot comprehend or see the from the 4th dimension up, now, bear with me, according to the Multiverse theory, there are an infinite number of universes, one for each possible thing, therefore, there are also an infinite number of universes, where they can travel to ours, so you might be up against something from a parallel. Maybe the deities described by our religions are from there as well. I wish you the best of luck with your quest for knowledge, and from now on, ALWAYS TAKE THE F*CKING PHONE.

Dont know how its in the US, in Europe every catholic diocese has (at least) one exorcist.

Might be your best bet to call the office of the local bishop and ask if you can see him.

I will never look at an orange the same again...

I think the priest back home is a very good start. During this, you must find out if your gf was visited as well.

I forget: are you religious in any way? Is there a priest that you could talk to? Maybe she's telling you to talk to your priest so she can prove how powerful she is (assuming you do talk to your priest and assuming he does know of her and knows what she is capable of).

Are you going to ask some kind of religious person about this?

Shiiiiiit.

I think 'bash the orange up your arse' could be an appropriate response at this stage.

As i mentionned... It's time to punch her and see what happens. It's time to Jet Li her ass.

I loooove these stories. Im equally entertained, spooked and worried for you, friend. Be safe, please.. but i have to say, i cant stop thinking about what would happened if you destroyed that orange..

She broke into his house didn't she?

Maybe he needs to salt his house up, with pure salt... If she doesn't enter his house, we'll know what she is.. Throwing pure salt and/or holy water can help us finding out whether she is a demon or not...

Do not take this advice, but someone seriously needs to say this.

Jack her shit. Right in the face.

After all, you don't get a choice eventually, in her own words. Best option at this point is to do what you can to learn about her. If she won't tell you, you'll have to try to force a response and observe her reaction.

One thing's for sure, she could have killed you a long time ago if she wanted, considering how easily she can get inside your apartment. And if she changes physically, or reacts in some way incongruent with her physical appearance like with exceptional speed or strength, you can be sure you're at least no longer dealing with a natural threat.

Buy a bloody bag of oranges and dump it on her head. Fuck! This bitch is annoying me! Best of luck OP!

Iron miaden,

This is a fucking puzzle. I doubt Rose will hurt you... not yet. Don't act agressively with her though. It's useless. The most important thing is to find out what the fuck is going on.

Just laugh in her fucking face. It's pretty clear that she cannot: 1. Make you take the orange by force, and 2. Trick you into taking it. It's pretty clear that you have to take it of your own will, knowing that it's not an ordinary fruit, and that there might be consequences. She's trying to scare the living shit out of you, until you decide that anything is better than living like that, so you take the orange. There is nothing she can do. She had many opportunities to hurt you or your family, but she didn't. That would be forcing it on you. Looks a lot like making a deal with the devil, so next time you see her just look deep in her eyes and tell her "I put a bullet in my own head before I'll let you take me, you son of a bitch!". You need something against her, and well... as bad as it sounds, losing an elemental part of her plan is a pretty great threat.

try to not curse if you meet her again, it may help.

So - if you have time, what was the story of your baptism, please?

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http://symbolism.wikia.com/wiki/Symbolism_Wi In some countries, "blood oranges" are seen as a symbol of the death of Jesus. ~ Wikipedia A blood orange: http://newyork.seriouseats.com/images/20110203-135665bloodorange.jpg

I like how I just asked my Father to pick up some orange juice.

/r/hownottogiveafuck

A small, easily-handled knife could help you.

That's some funky junk brother o.O

I would've sat. No lie. I would have been scared shitless, but damned if you do, damned if you don't. Maybe you would've even sorted things out.

You have been RES tagged as "OrangeBoy"

What the devil happened when you took to damn orange?????

But my reasoning was that nobody ever physically attacked me, so the worst-case scenario would be I am offered another fucking orange.

Amidst all of this crazy bullshit, that made me laugh.

IF you're really getting these encounters why not video tape them.

The amount I believe in this story has gone down to 0.

Well.....ask your priest??

This is a fun story and all, but it really doesn't bring out a feeling of fear in me at all.

I think at times you are over discriptinve of some things that need to be left to mystory, or explaining things too often. It gets repetitive. I dont care that you care or not if I believe this is real or just a story. Stop trying to convince me of silly stuff like that as it make sthe reader fall out of any grip you had them in and puts them back to a "oh right.. just a story" mindset. It makes it hard to get into the story or the environment.

Damn.... This is really creepy. But I just had to laugh when she said "silly boy"... I finished it by reading it as Trix are for kids......

Vampires. If you eat the orange, you become one.

All this just for a orange, just take the damn orange and get this over and done with.

There is no other option.

How did you know she was looking at the orange, or not at you if you were biking away from her? I'm not trying to debase your story, just want to give you tips if you actually intend to turn this into a book :)

I know you like to believe it's a cult, but if you really want answers you would admit to yourself that the cult theory (present human cult, at least) doesn't account for the lack of aging and having personal past possessions and impossibly inhuman creepiness and other things. I stick behind my intelligent being theory at the moment. They could have figured out time travel which would account for your possessions. The rest of it, too, matches my theory.

See ya next update!

I may have missed something but these two individuals do not seem to threaten you with physical violence how are you sure that they wish to harm you, your bloodline and your girlfriends bloodline could be special to them in some way. maybe they with to help you, share knowledge, something along those lines?

please if you read this message me i would like to talk to you in private

Right hook to the jaw, knock that bitch out. Or carry a self defense weapon with you like a taser, expandable baton, etc...

It was fun till I read MY FUCKIN NAME!! I AM Miloš too!!!! FUCK YOU!! :( Next one...

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Not being funny, i'd have snapped that bitches neck the first time I saw her, and if not then I'd have pushed her off the fucking balcony. Problem solved.

something my parents have told me is that if i see someone dead in my dreams, or out and about, and i knew them or they knew me, it in a way means that they want you to visit their grave.

Dude you do not know how much I am wanting you to be smart and go to some church and ask about her. Then getting a bunch of fucking guns, and not a pussy shit .22 i'm talking a fucking .308 or fuck it go total bad ass and get a fucking .50 caliber rifle.

Ugh I am so upset. I believed this story and stuff up until now. I love when REAL creepy stuff happens...but now I feel like it is getting more far fetched and fake...too much stuff is happening for it to be real...idk...

Dude, talk to a priest. I'm assuming you're Christian because you say you were baptized. Satan always tries to challenge God, that's probably what this is. In the end, God always wins.

White people... Follow every horror movie stereotype and then wonder why they end up dead. I'm going to laugh if in the second part you and your girlfriend are in a creepy house and decide to split up and search for clues.

What do you have to lose by kicking the shit out of this person and handing them over to the cops? Even if she is demon and kills you or gets away, you lose nothing by trying to manhandle her for the police to deal with. She's going to get you anyway. Man the fuck up kill her if you have to. I get it though, your writing a story for our enjoyment.

You should have just been standing in front of her, called the police and if she tried to go away beat the shit out of her.

Being logical at a time like this, is illogical. You're a marked man. From what is sounds like, your family has been marked for some kind of destiny for the most part of a century now. Take the orange. It will all end.

I guess there is only one thing left to do... throw tHE CHEEEEEASE!!!!

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This one time Kfc didn't have any chicken.

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Guys, I know what will happen if he actually picks up that orange!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cL_qGMfbtAk

Watch at 0:15 extremely NSFW