"The point is that the character(s) are unlikable,the point is that the deaths were unsatisfying,the point is that it was supposed to make you mad/feel like It was unfair",Cool,then don't get suprised when people feel those things.

🎙️ Apprehensive_Ring_39 · 599 points · Posted at 14:11:28 on March 31, 2024 · (Permalink)*


I'm not necessarily talking about any piece of media(maybe I am but meh)but this is something I usually see.

Whenever a character is annoying/really unlikable or when a moment made you feel frustrated/angry and Whenever a death was badly written handled,people will usually go,

"OH but the point is that the character is unlikable/not meant to be liked!"

"This death wasn't made to be satisfying/good and you're supposed to feel frustrated."

"The point was that it was supposed to be unfair."

And it's like..Cool, then why are you shocked that people are upset at those unsatisfying/frustrated moments or unlikable characters,if the point is that they're supposed to be unlikable or the moments are meant to be unsatisfying/frustrating?

Plus Those points don't always work if, A.the characters themselves aren't well written and are just nothing more then a nuisance.

B.if the writing for the moments are badly written or if the characters/writing for the moments are badly handled/written.

Plus Something being "The Point" doesn't always make sense or change the fact that "The Point" Fucking Sucks or is Bad.

If anything,it just makes "The Point of the Scene,etc" worse if the Scenes or characters themselves aren't well written/done well.

And plus if a character is unlikable and people don't like them(whether it's their personality,character,etc), do not be suprised if people don't like them if "The Point of them is too be disliked."

This basically applies not just to anime and Manga but also other Animated Series and Novels and such.

Again,Something being "The Point" doesn't change if the Point fucking sucks.

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Arcodiant ¡ 135 points ¡ Posted at 14:56:42 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

"We trained him wrong, on purpose, as a joke"

Lunardose ¡ 18 points ¡ Posted at 06:24:01 on April 1, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

Face to foot style, how do you like it?

But yes agreed with OP's point. Something being intended doesn't make it good. It has to be quality on its own independent merit

Appropriate-Hand3016 ¡ 4 points ¡ Posted at 15:51:11 on April 4, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

Right intentional doesn't equal well executed.

PCN24454 ¡ 17 points ¡ Posted at 14:58:50 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

Oh, I thought it was a Kengan Omega reference.

Arcodiant ¡ 25 points ¡ Posted at 15:06:10 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

Kung Pow

HappiestIguana ¡ 49 points ¡ Posted at 18:29:25 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)*

Often these kinds of people will appeal to essentially a thermian argument, arguing that it is intentional and makes sense in-universe. The way I like to counter it is

"my problem is not that the writing decision is not adequately justified by the text, my problem is the writing decision"

For a specific example, I was discussing Sea of Stars the other day, and a big writing problem in that (otherwise very good go play it) game is that the main characters are extremely boring people. A lot of defenders were arguing that their bland personalities are intentional and a natural consequence of their backstory. I could only reply with

"The problem is not that their blandness is not adequately justified, my problem is that they're bland."

total_egglipse ¡ 15 points ¡ Posted at 04:42:14 on April 1, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

I think this is a good distinction and one of the reasons I moved away from a lot of anime. There’s very often in-universe reasons for young girls to be heavily sexualized and teenagers being a million times more interesting, attractive, powerful and wise than any adult present - but as story decisions, I just don’t like them.

Oksbad ¡ 5 points ¡ Posted at 05:08:13 on April 2, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)*

To give a totally normie pop culture example, in-universe arguments in favor of House Elf slavery really annoy me.

Yes, I get that Rowling stacked the deck to make it so moraltm people can totally own slaves guilt free (not that she did a particularly good job of that, but I don’t want to rant about it again). I just think that is an absolutely garbage literary choice that butchers the themes and characters of the book. For what? A lazy dunk on annoying teenage activists?

HappiestIguana ¡ 4 points ¡ Posted at 05:28:22 on April 2, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

The worst part about that for me is that I have seen other instances of the "this species is legitimately inferior and thus is enslaved" trope in several sci-fi and fantasy settings, but the crucial thing is that in every single example it is portrayed as fucked up with the slavers being evil.

Except Harry Potter.

LibraryBestMission ¡ 2 points ¡ Posted at 18:47:07 on April 1, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

"my problem is not that the writing decision is not adequately justified by the text, my problem is the writing decision"

I think that this line of thought also applies to plot holes. Explaining a plot hole doesn't necessarily make it any better, if the problem is with the writing itself. People like foreshadowing and Chekhov's gun since it makes narrative turns satisfying, like watching a Rube Goldberg machine. An unfunny joke doesn't get funny even if you explain it.

HappiestIguana ¡ 3 points ¡ Posted at 19:35:16 on April 1, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)*

I don't know about that. Sometimes "plot holes" are a matter of clarity/presentation rather than actual logical problems, but I find that most of the time when people complain about plot holes it's clear they weren't paying attention or it's super nitpicky.

Kintonokai ¡ 2 points ¡ Posted at 22:57:41 on April 5, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

Dude, i only realized the main characters were boring when grown Garl showed up, my man is like a lantern among burnt up candles.

Legal-Treat-5582 ¡ 421 points ¡ Posted at 14:29:23 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

There's a difference between being mad at something and understanding that's the point, and being mad at something and thinking it's a problem.

No_Help3669 ¡ 237 points ¡ Posted at 15:40:16 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

I mean, I can be mad at something, know it’s the point, and still think it’s a problem. The complaint of something being done for “shock value” exists for a reason. The point of whatever it was was to get an immediate visceral negative reaction. And it did. I am aware that was its goal. However, I still feel that in doing whatever it was, it was a problem, because the price to the narrative wasn’t worth the short term reaction.

9point9five ¡ 75 points ¡ Posted at 19:56:47 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

I hate when people spout the " you just don't get it" line.

Like anyone who doesn't like how it was executed simply doesn't "get it"

No_Help3669 ¡ 37 points ¡ Posted at 19:57:57 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

Ah yes, as meatball puts it: “I get it. I ain’t laughing, but I get it.”

Thebunkerparodie ¡ 4 points ¡ Posted at 08:33:06 on April 1, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

tbh, I think part of an audience can not get the point of something no matter how obvious the author make it (perexample, the idea webby being related to scrooge goes against found familly when it doesn't since webby still has plenty of found familly and bealey become webby found familly, it was just a switch from the mcduck to beakley and it didn't destroyed her arc since the characters took her in not knowing they're related). Sometimes this can happen because some have odd headcanon about part of the show (even if nothing about said headcanon is mentionned by both the author or the media).

9point9five ¡ 2 points ¡ Posted at 19:41:31 on April 1, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

Yes, of course, but my gripe isn't with the people who are saying that and are right, it's aimed at the ones that just throw that line out there as a defense.

Thebunkerparodie ¡ 1 points ¡ Posted at 20:16:33 on April 1, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

I also notied say it's the story point when it'snot (per example, ducktales 2017 scrooge is written as someone who progress through the show and get better thanks to his familly and himself getting his arc yet some claim he's meant to be unlikable when he's a flawed good guy like louie).

travelerfromabroad ¡ 2 points ¡ Posted at 19:19:17 on April 1, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

Most of the time it's done to people who genuinely don't get it though, and especially to people who don't TRY to get it.

9point9five ¡ 1 points ¡ Posted at 19:40:43 on April 1, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

Idk, from what I have seen it's people throwing that line out when 90% of the responses just don't agree with them.

My example was aimed strictly at those people

Legal-Treat-5582 ¡ 48 points ¡ Posted at 16:18:52 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

That's a totally fair example. It's not a black and white thing after all.

linest10 ¡ -11 points ¡ Posted at 19:44:13 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

The point is that differently of you most people only think it's a "problem" because made them feel uncomfortable

Also creators have no reason to make their art palatable for people who can't separate reality from fiction

No_Help3669 ¡ 25 points ¡ Posted at 19:54:42 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

I mean, in my experience that is a different issue to what is being referred to?

Most times I see the “it’s supposed to make you feel that way” argument, it’s about someone simply not liking a story or thinking it’s badly done, and it’s fans defending its quality

While the “people can’t seperate fiction from reality” issue is usually more about “this story depicts someone doing something bad and thus its author is a bad person”

Both are dumb problems, but I don’t think they overlap much.

linest10 ¡ -8 points ¡ Posted at 20:02:22 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

I just think such notion that a story is "problematic" open doors for entitled "fans" that believe they know better than the creators, also let's be real most people don't even understand basic narrative and only consume what's entertaining, comfortable for them never truly expanding their experiences, so why should anyone take cricisms coming from this type of casual consumer? Have them read or watched anything that not the mainstream media or a specific genre?

So yeah as a creator myself I'm very skeptical, specifically reading some horrible posts in this sub

But again I see your point and I believe it's valid when it's NOT malicious

exiting_stasis_pod ¡ 7 points ¡ Posted at 21:00:44 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

I recently felt uncomfortable when two tv characters who had been given a perfect sendoff with their arcs wrapped up in a season finale were brought back for a couple of mediocre episodes, which backtracked on their existing character development, and then were given a significantly worse “ending” that was more bittersweet than the original ending.

I think the ending was cheap. I know it is supposed to be sad, but the fact that they completely backtracked on these characters arcs for the sole purpose of getting them to participate in the event that gave them their sad ending kind of invalidates the episode. If the writers were loyal to their own canon, then these two would never have even been in the episode. It’s not that sad things are “unpalatable,” it’s that the entire scenario felt contrived, contradicted established characterizations, and therefore felt unearned.

Evnosis ¡ 1 points ¡ Posted at 12:43:51 on April 1, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

Sure. But then those creators shouldn't complain when people start expressing negative opinions about their art.

NanashiTheWarlock ¡ 73 points ¡ Posted at 17:06:46 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

Something can be the point and still be a problem

Game of Thrones spoilers, just in case

Arya Killing the Night King was the point, but It doesn't make It suck any less, nor does It make It any less of a problem

Legal-Treat-5582 ¡ 24 points ¡ Posted at 17:12:22 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

True, it's not a black and white problem.

Dodo_Baron ¡ 8 points ¡ Posted at 08:18:03 on April 1, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

I disagree with this one. Arya killing the night king doesn't add to the thematic point of the series. Nor does it have anything to really say, it's not like it finishes her arc off either.

It's just there to be surprising.

A better example would be the red wedding. Which is infuriating and horrifying to watch. But is also the whole point. Rob is way out of his league and doesn't understand people or kingdom relations and pays the price.

The death adds an amazing amount to the thematic point to the series. Even if it's horribly infuriating to watch in real time.

NanashiTheWarlock ¡ -1 points ¡ Posted at 11:59:39 on April 1, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

Except that You can't disagree here, because I'm correct

It being there to be surprising was the entire point, the fucking writers said so themselves, so I don't know why the fuck are You arguing with literal facts

Arya killing the night king was the point, that's no debatable, that's literally true

Dodo_Baron ¡ 2 points ¡ Posted at 15:05:47 on April 1, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)*

It being there to be surprising was the entire point

The point is to be surprising.

I agree with what the point of the Arya killing the night king is. I just disagree it's a good example of Op's point.

And said as much in my initial comment as shown above.

Edit: or just insult me and block me works too for discussion I guess.

Throwaway02062004 ¡ 1 points ¡ Posted at 12:20:26 on April 1, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

Bro he literally agreed with you. Reading comprehension devil

mutantraniE ¡ 2 points ¡ Posted at 22:38:11 on April 1, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

Agreed by writing “I disagree”?

dazechong ¡ 4 points ¡ Posted at 02:49:10 on April 1, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

Because while the point is probably in the outline of the plot, the storywriting is terrible. That's what season 8 feels like to me. They just took the outline of the plot, slapped together some barely there story, and rushed it.

Now they think people forgot about how they destroyed game of Thrones and is now doing 3 body problems.

AmaterasuWolf21 ¡ 13 points ¡ Posted at 23:40:30 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

I think Hunger Games fans get it.

Finnick's death is hated by everyone and they all argue that it shouldn't happen but that's what the movie is trying to say. That war deaths are senseless

Shadow_Wolf_X871 ¡ 1 points ¡ Posted at 15:25:06 on April 1, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

I feel like that line is razor thin when you end up with the same end result.

Legal-Treat-5582 ¡ 2 points ¡ Posted at 16:05:01 on April 1, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

Even if that is the case, it's still there.

Shadow_Wolf_X871 ¡ 1 points ¡ Posted at 16:28:22 on April 1, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

I mean, we acknowledge it's there but if we just leave at that it's arguably superficial is the problem. At the end of the day whether a chef meant for you to love or loathe their food, if you're dissatisfied with the end result then you're dissatisfied with the end result

Legal-Treat-5582 ¡ 3 points ¡ Posted at 16:36:54 on April 1, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

Sure, but in one scenario it's a problem, while the other isn't.

Shadow_Wolf_X871 ¡ 1 points ¡ Posted at 16:38:32 on April 1, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

I mean, it kind of is? I just suppose it's a matter of whether the creator cares or not.

Legal-Treat-5582 ¡ 2 points ¡ Posted at 16:56:23 on April 1, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

It can still be, yes.

Genoscythe_ ¡ 218 points ¡ Posted at 15:04:40 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

That's a valid criticism of entertainment, but it can't be a comprehensive criticism of art.

Artists can have good reasons to make the audience feel frustrated, uncertain, angry, or miserable.

The expectation for all art to be entertainment in service of the audience's base desires, is bad.

Aros001 ¡ 108 points ¡ Posted at 16:24:44 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

I think a good saying I've heard before is that good writing will have the audience feeling frustrated, uncertain, angry, or miserable with the situation within the story because they're so invested, while bad writing will have the audience directing those feelings towards the writer.

HappiestIguana ¡ 39 points ¡ Posted at 18:32:34 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

A good example for this is Uncut Gems. It's one of the most frustrating movies I have ever seen. I spent the entire thing stressed the fuck out and hoping someone would punch Sandler in the face, but dear god what an incredible movie. I admire the writing and acting for being able to make me feel that way so intensely.

joeplus5 ¡ 20 points ¡ Posted at 00:50:07 on April 1, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

I get what you're saying but there are many people who just immediately shit on the story and the author when something in the story itself doesn't go the way they wished. They expect the story to entertain them throughout the whole way.

Shadow_Wolf_X871 ¡ 5 points ¡ Posted at 15:27:05 on April 1, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

You mean they expect their entertainment to entertain them the whole way through?

joeplus5 ¡ 2 points ¡ Posted at 16:14:49 on April 1, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

Stories are not just "entertainment". That's a bad way of looking at art. The writer isn't supposed to make the story go in the way which ends up the happiest according to your desires. If you want to read something that's completely for entertainment only then read a light-hearted comedy.

Shadow_Wolf_X871 ¡ 5 points ¡ Posted at 16:30:59 on April 1, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

That damn near borders on pretentious for anyone short of a starving artist. Of course not everyone can be satisfied with a work, that's just the nature of people, but to scold people because they're dissatisfied with the direction it takes (I pre-emptively include the caveat that they're not harassing assholes about it to the creator) is a touch obnoxious.

joeplus5 ¡ 1 points ¡ Posted at 16:53:59 on April 1, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

It's not pretentious. If you have a narrow view of what art is how is that my fault? Art by definition is not something that's meant to entertain you. Just because that's the kind of art most people are used to, doesn't make it the only kind of art. There are stories that exist just for the sake of absolutely depressing the hell out of you. There are stories that are supposed to teach you something or show you a message or meaning about life. That message may not be something you like, but it would still be reality. There is art that only exists to show you the ugly reality, that art is by definition aiming for the opposite of entertainment.

Of course not everyone can be satisfied with a work, that's just the nature of people, but to scold people because they're dissatisfied with the direction it takes

I'm not scolding you for not being satisfied by a work of art. If you don't like a work, that's fine. Not everything is for everyone. What's not fine is claiming that art should entertain you(as in bring you amusement) when that's not necessary at all. What's also not fine is trying to fault the artist just because they didn't satisfy expectations that you set for yourself. If an artist is writing a depressing story, and their goal is to make it as depressing as possible, you are in no position to say the artist didn't do a good job if you expected the story to make you happy and then was disappointed that the expectation you set was not met.

My original point which you initially responded to was arguing against the people who read a story with the expectation or demand that everything goes the way that makes them happy and brings them enjoyment. They like a character for example and when something bad happens to that character in the story, they get pissed at the author because they didn't want that to happen to the character, and they ignore whether or not that event was actually consistent with the writing of the story, just because they judge it completely based on emotional reaction rather than based on writing quality.

Shadow_Wolf_X871 ¡ 3 points ¡ Posted at 17:21:46 on April 1, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

If you want to read something that's completely for entertainment only then read a light-hearted comedy.

Forgive me if this came across as a bit pretentious XD of course it's not the only form of art, however I bring up the starving artist point because it's seems a bit off to proclaim that art is the opposite of entertainment... when most forms of art consumed today are consumed AS entertainment. Shows, Movies, Video Games, there ARE those who are definitely more about the vision of the artists working on it, but it'd be a bit disingenuous since that's not really what ends up on the chopping block in talks like these (at least not to my knowledge)

So yes, unfortunately participating in consumerism is somewhat of a necessary evil for a LOT of artists, but when you're gladly taking money for your art I'd say there's nothing wrong with people being vocal about not liking a work because it didn't fit a certain standard; within REASON.

Someone should be laughed out of the room if they didn't like Devilman for it's depressing ending, it delivered exactly what it promised on the tin. But being pissed that a beloved character died in a way you felt was unsatisfying? That's absolutely valid, and the author claiming it's supposed to feel that way doesn't really resolve that.

Do I think every story needs to cater to the whims of it's audience? No. But at the same time (again, sans actual harassment and death threats) I think being bothered/upset is a valid response

Edit: Unless of course this post was entirely to stand up for INCREDIBLY indie projects, in which case more power to you honestly

joeplus5 ¡ 3 points ¡ Posted at 17:28:05 on April 1, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

it's seems a bit off to proclaim that art is the opposite of entertainment...

That's not what I said. I said that some art is trying to do the opposite of entertainment. I still recognize that most art is trying to entertain in some form.

Someone should be laughed out of the room if they didn't like Devilman for it's depressing ending, it delivered exactly what it promised on the tin. But being pissed that a beloved character died in a way you felt was unsatisfying? That's absolutely valid, and the author claiming it's supposed to feel that way doesn't really resolve that.

Nothing in a story is supposed to feel "unsatisfying". Satisfaction isn't the same as entertainment. Satisfaction means that expectations have been met. An author is supposed to meet readers' expectations which the author set themselves by writing the story in a certain way. It's like an unspoken contract between the author and the reader. The author isn't supposed to entertain you the whole time, but they're not supposed to leave you unsatisfied as long as your unsatisfaction lies within what would have been reasonably expected from the story, not what you expected based on pure emotion. If a character died in a way that felt unsatisfying relative to what the story had built up, then yes it's valid to criticise the author for it.

Shadow_Wolf_X871 ¡ 2 points ¡ Posted at 17:43:37 on April 1, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

Alright aye, I can agree to that then

welchssquelches ¡ -45 points ¡ Posted at 15:49:24 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

The expectation for all art to be entertainment in service of the audience's base desires, is bad.

Holding what's supposed to be entertainment to the standard of some "high art" is bad actually, and used pretty frequently as away to hand waive criticism

Genoscythe_ ¡ 64 points ¡ Posted at 15:57:40 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

I didn't say "high art", I said art.

CRPGs, Whodunnit novels, highschool drama netflix shows, and superhero movies can still have artistic potential that the constant expectation for uncritical entertainment is dragging down.

Taking a setup that could be just used for instant gratification of following all the genre tropes and providing cathartic enoyment to an audience of consoomers, but instead taking it a step further, is a valid approach to strorytelling and leaves our world to be more interesting.

welchssquelches ¡ -41 points ¡ Posted at 16:03:47 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

I didn't say "high art", I said art.

It's all the same to me, holding what is supposed to be entertainment to the degree of art is simply silly. It's entertainment, it's supposed to be entertaining or make you think, or get some rise out of you in some way shape or form before it's supposed to be art. That's part of what makes story-telling an art form, you need to actually be able to make something that is good to watch, and believable while also delivering the message you're trying to deliver. I think most media falls very short of that, and use shocking character deaths and the like as a crutch rather than a real tool to further the story.

CRPGs, Whodunnit novels, highschool drama netflix shows, and superhero movies can still have artistic potential that the constant expectation for uncritical instant gratification entertainment is dragging down.

I agree, but I don't think asking for satisfying and well written stories to actually have more substance to them than "Yeah and he died and you're supposed to be pissed about it" is in the same vein as blatant wish fulfillment and popcorn flicks

Genoscythe_ ¡ 37 points ¡ Posted at 16:14:47 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)*

it's supposed to be entertaining or make you think, or get some rise out of you in some way shape or form

The thing is that all of these can be the tools of art, but only the first of them is typically considered "satisfying".

Leaving a movie theatre with your thoughts rattling in your brain about the ideas that the movie presented and refused to straightforwardly answer, is not "satisfying".

Closing the last page of a book with a vaguely directed anger at the nature of reality that the story put a harsh spotlight on, is not "fun".

Stories that you feel satisfied with by the end, can be some of the least substantive ones, that just played all the right notes so you felt comfortable going along with the ride: You went through with the Call to Adventure, the exploration of the world, the All is Lost Moment, the epic blood-pumping climax, there was a big damn kiss, then the credits rolled, and you felt good about how comfortably familiar and homey it all felt.

welchssquelches ¡ -7 points ¡ Posted at 16:20:39 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

Again, I completely agree with your point, but a lot of writers fail on both fronts. You can make a story that makes you think and gives you something to think about, and a lot of writers make trite for the sake of trite. A story being black pilled as fuck doesn't magically make it good

yellowpig10 ¡ 15 points ¡ Posted at 16:29:23 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

the only thing that was going through my head here was jasper batt jr. from no more heroes 2 "The boss was supposed to be an frustrating, unfair, unfun boss to show how revenge is empty and unsatisfying!" Cool, the final boss of your game still sucks ass

superdan56 ¡ 33 points ¡ Posted at 14:59:10 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

I will always say that if something is intentional, that doesn’t make it less boring/stupid/uninteresting. But I do think people are allowed to enjoy things which make intentional decisions like that, but let’s not convince ourselves that marvel’s tone problems are suddenly not real criticism just because josh weed man thinks he’s being tongue in cheek.

Edit: TIL it’s tongue in cheek not tongue and cheek. I feel kind of silly.

_S1syphus ¡ 11 points ¡ Posted at 17:18:39 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

It takes a very good writer to pull those off well, i personally think Cyberpunk is a good example. For 9 episodes we see David struggling, sure, but also coming into his own, maturing, bonding with his new family and exalting his new freedon. And on the 10th episode when he goes insane from cybernetic psychosis and dies along with half of that family the emptiness we feel as an audience reflects how Lucy is feeling and we finally see the otherside of the coin, running the edge means you're free but you have to fall sometime.

I think Cyberpunk was able to do it well not just because of the aforementioned writing but also because the show is a tight, contained 10 episodes and there's so much foreshadowing to help prepare you for it.

A counter example is any version of the common shonen trope of a depraved, lazy, coward like Mineta from MHA or Zenitsu in Demon Slayer. Their characters are a blight on the show that raises my blood pressure when they're on screen. And what do the properties do with that annoyance at the characters? Do they ever get a comeuppance, do they ever get changed or seriously challenged on their behavior? No, we're expected to forget all their terrible annoying traits when it gets serious so zenitsu can spam clap and flash or mineta pull out his balls and the shows expect the audience to applaud.

So like I said, the negative feelings a work can give you aren't bad, they just have to be well directed by the work

Revlar ¡ 3 points ¡ Posted at 19:27:08 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

As a counterargument, I will point out Cyberpunk is a story with a good beginning and end, but its middle is relegated to a single expository episode after a timeskip. There's something to complain about there.

Also, to nitpick: It really fumbles Lucy's characterization. The way she acts in Episode 2 is completely at odds with how she acts later. It's not something that couldn't be bridged, but there's no bridge because of how condensed the story is.

ArtMnd ¡ 2 points ¡ Posted at 11:06:48 on April 1, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

I guess a full cour ( 12~14 episodes) would have been better, huh?

I mean, still cool to have a single cour anime, but they compressed it a bit TOO much

PCN24454 ¡ 171 points ¡ Posted at 14:21:37 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

But that means that it wasn’t badly written. It’s only badly written when the author doesn’t get the intended reaction.

cheffpm ¡ 70 points ¡ Posted at 15:34:57 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

yeah i wanna agree with op but this complaint is usually just cause people didn't get the story they want or a power fantasy

Lukthar123 ¡ 19 points ¡ Posted at 15:45:36 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

My friend, there's this underrated source for power fantasy wish fullfillment, have you ever heard of isekai and shonen?

Novel_Visual_4152 ¡ 25 points ¡ Posted at 16:15:12 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

Bro forgot Manwha

DigibroHavingAStroke ¡ 13 points ¡ Posted at 16:35:09 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

Manwhas never turn into power fantasy!

-GOH reader

ThatGuy1727 ¡ 9 points ¡ Posted at 17:09:42 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

Agreed, not even a single time!

-HCLW reader

PaunchBurgerTime ¡ 4 points ¡ Posted at 18:53:34 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

Pretty sure the story the guy is not naming IS a shonen.

cheffpm ¡ 3 points ¡ Posted at 17:00:16 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

touching a light novel is damn near heretical

HfUfH ¡ 63 points ¡ Posted at 14:57:31 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

I disagree, in my opinion. Bad writering can be both failure to execute your intended vision or just having a shitty vision in general.

KarlozFloyd ¡ 54 points ¡ Posted at 15:02:11 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

You can't judge a salad with the same standards you judge an ice cream.

HeyItsAlternateMe23 ¡ 82 points ¡ Posted at 15:10:53 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

True, but if someone tries to make a salad with lettuce, barbecue sauce, marshmallows, pineapples, bacon bits, and Carolina Reapers, that’s going to be a shit salad

KarlozFloyd ¡ -8 points ¡ Posted at 15:11:48 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

A good Chef can add more ingredients to make it work.

welchssquelches ¡ 60 points ¡ Posted at 15:44:23 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

Yeah, a good chef, not a hack

KarlozFloyd ¡ 4 points ¡ Posted at 15:45:34 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

If you describe the horrific events that happen in Berserk, you would think a hack wrote it because he wanted to be edgy

PaunchBurgerTime ¡ 33 points ¡ Posted at 19:08:08 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

That's because the person who started writing it was an edgy hack. Miura has said in interviews he originally just wanted to write something cruel and edgy. The beautiful thing about Berserk that elevates it to full-on literature status, is that it was written over the course of a lifetime. The elements of redemption and healing came in as he got older and more skilled at his art.

KazuyaProta ¡ 22 points ¡ Posted at 15:57:24 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

Nothing can beat having a literal mutated rapebaby army

Or how Berserk treats the wizard who oversaw this as a funni old man

welchssquelches ¡ 10 points ¡ Posted at 16:05:24 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

Yeah, and it works in the context of the story. The issue is that most writers can't even do that, they can't actually write what they want to write in a way that actually works in that context and doesn't come across as a plot at shock factor etc

TFlarz ¡ 0 points ¡ Posted at 00:43:08 on April 1, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

That sounds delish. 

DragonsAndSaints ¡ 0 points ¡ Posted at 01:55:35 on April 1, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

I agree, if only because pineapples ruin everything they touch. ...Much like how there are some storytelling elements or concepts that ruin everything THEY touch!

HfUfH ¡ -7 points ¡ Posted at 15:10:13 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

Yes I can. The standard which I judge all food is

  1. Taste

  2. Nutrition

  3. Price

I don't see why I can't judge books of all genres by a singular standard, In fact, I would say. I can use the same categories. I used to judge food to judge books as well.

  1. Enjoyment(similar to taste because they both provide you with happiness or catharsis)

  2. Knowledge(similar to nutrition because they both provide with pratical benfits)

  3. Lengh(similar to price because it is the investment required to obtain the two previous categories)

KarlozFloyd ¡ 21 points ¡ Posted at 15:11:02 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

You don't go buy an ice cream expecting the same nutrition you would get with a salad.

HfUfH ¡ 9 points ¡ Posted at 15:22:45 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

No, but that does not mean the nutrition category gets ignored. It meatly means the boons of the ice creme(taste, price) is enough to compensate for the weaknesses of its nutrition.

I judge things that are comparable to the same standard. Because to do so otherwise would be to nullify the point of the standard in the first place. If you've individually made up a standard for every single thing you consume, you will have no reference for whether anything is good or bad

KarlozFloyd ¡ 15 points ¡ Posted at 15:23:25 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

It gets ignored when you decide to get an ice cream.

HfUfH ¡ 4 points ¡ Posted at 15:36:22 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

Not me, I accept the fact that ice cream is unhealthy, and I eat it for the other positive quality it has.

When I judge ice cream, its a 4/5 in taste, 1/5 in nutrition, and 3/5 in price. I didn't know other people simply just removed the nutrition factor in its entirety when talking about ice cream.

Also, i cant be the only one getting tired of your food analogies in a literary discussion right? Could you stop using them?

KarlozFloyd ¡ 6 points ¡ Posted at 15:37:45 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

I won't stop.

KarlozFloyd ¡ 8 points ¡ Posted at 15:37:15 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

The moment you decide you want an ice cream, you don't care if it's unhealthy or not.

HfUfH ¡ 2 points ¡ Posted at 15:41:40 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

I'm sorry I'm not dealing with your food analogies anymore. Have a nice day.

KarlozFloyd ¡ 5 points ¡ Posted at 15:42:01 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

Have an ice cream

KarlozFloyd ¡ 28 points ¡ Posted at 15:13:18 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

Taste and price are entirely subjective, whether you like it or you can afford it doesn't speak about the quality of the product at all.

HfUfH ¡ 5 points ¡ Posted at 15:25:55 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

We are taking about art, literally everything is subjective. In art, there is no such thing as an objective "quality of the product". Theres only peoples opinions on it. You can argue that the knowledge category can be objective, but it is still up to subjective interpretation on whether that knowledge is actually useful or not.

KarlozFloyd ¡ 9 points ¡ Posted at 15:26:50 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

That's my point, I don't disagree with that

HfUfH ¡ 6 points ¡ Posted at 15:30:36 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

If you dont disagree with with the idea that art is subjective, why are you comparing subjective opinions to "quality of the product", as if objective quality exists in art at all?

That is contradictory.

KarlozFloyd ¡ 5 points ¡ Posted at 15:38:28 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

Because that was your first argument. That there is a universal standard to judge things like ice cream and a salad.

HfUfH ¡ 7 points ¡ Posted at 15:40:34 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

No I didn't. No same person would try to push the subjective opinions on food as objective facts. I spoke in an authoritative tone because adding "personally" or "in my opinion" before all of my sentences are a pain in my ass

KarlozFloyd ¡ 5 points ¡ Posted at 15:41:39 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

Opinions can be authoritative, fascist, wrong, etc.

HfUfH ¡ 2 points ¡ Posted at 15:42:49 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

Well my wasn't, it was merly my subjective opinion, Because that's the only opinion anyone can ever give in regards to subjects like art or food preference.

KarlozFloyd ¡ 2 points ¡ Posted at 15:43:40 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

Opinions aren't limited to one regarding any topic tbh

Zestyclose_Remove947 ¡ 2 points ¡ Posted at 17:50:57 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

Zero objectivity is a hard logical argument to make imo simply because I feel like we can easily extend this axiom beyond art and say there is no objectivity in the human mind at all.

I mean, it's a common view, relativism is very popular, I kinda reject it though. You can burn a cake. You can set out to make a cake and bake a cookie, these are objective failures to create what was intended.

You might have a cookie now, and can judge that on its own merits, but the process of baking a cake (based on the definition of the cake at hand) failed.

I don't even necessarily disagree with the logic of it being totally subjective, but it can't stop at art, it needs to be much broader.

Which is why it's a lot easier logically simply to say there is some standard, that is difficult to define or extremely contextual and conditional. Just because we created these frameworks doesn't mean they aren't defined or have meaning, artists can improve objectively with technique, it's like, a central tenet of art to want to improve ones own skill in expression.

Mr_sushj ¡ 2 points ¡ Posted at 19:45:55 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

I mean this true of anything, it’s like saying everything is a social construct, which is true, there are an infinite amount of ways u can for example categorize colors, where blue stops and purple begins is all up to interpretation, but colors still exist, objectively light is hitting an object and reflecting back into ur eyes, but how we interpret and categorize that phenomenon is subjective

The concept doesn’t start at art, but art it’s one of the most obvious examples, as art doesn’t have a primary function, u can always test how fast a car a goes, we build cars with a specific function of going fast and preforming to a ceartin degree, while the way we measure the speed or performance is subjective, it’s important to note that they aren’t arbitrary, just cause something has some subjective aspect dosen’t mean that it’s arbitrary useless or unmeasurable, we can still divide colors into groups, and each group is different and has its own unique characteristics that we define as colors, even if in principle we could divide the color wheels into a 10 millions different colors

Just cause one definition allows multiple interpretations, dosent meant that no definitions hold value at all, or are arbitrary, excepting that art’s definition is nebulous doesn’t necessarily mean that all definitions are nebulous, to some degree they are but we are still able to get value from them

If we give a primary function to an object or thing then measuring what’s good object or a bad object becomes easy, what is the purpose of art? That’s a hot topic question, we still argue over what is art, as art is as specific as it is versatile. Maybe u would say “well u can measure art based on how many people like it” which would boil down to measuring what’s popular or what caters to the biggest audience and even this metric has its fault, is it based on how many people liked it? is it based on how many people would buy it, or is it based on the ratio of how many people like it to dislike it, and that dosen’t even touch on the volatility of how people like art, some pieces will go an entire lifetime before becoming popular, were these pieces bad art but suddenly became good art after a decade? No that would be silly,

there are simply too many outliers and styles to define a good metric for art. which is most critiques focus on the artist goals, what was the artist trying to achieve, if it’s a painter, how good are they at painting, and were the decisions intentional, or unintentional, did the execute their vision or did they fail.

Ur cake example begs the question, u already started with a very clear idea and definition of a cake in mind, u had an idea of what a cake should be, while art has a far more nebulous definition, once we have a definition u can move from there and judge things that fall within or out of that definition but even ur cake example will probably fail at outliers.

Uve probably played the definition game as u seem to have a pretty good understanding of meta ethics(idk if I’m even using that right) but let me ask u what is a cake?

KarlozFloyd ¡ 1 points ¡ Posted at 17:53:27 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

Ask a physicist what time, energy, mass or the void is and you will realize that even the most accurate theory of all time (quantum mechanics) is subject to multiple interpretations.

Zestyclose_Remove947 ¡ 1 points ¡ Posted at 18:02:10 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

I do realise that, I was just wondering whether you understood the logical implications of the argument you're positing. I kinda detest relativism as kind've an impractical non-starter but it certainly has an undeniable logical appeal. It still has holes like everything though, failure of intent is imo one of the stronger scalpels that's used to dismantle it.

However multiple people can agree on frameworks to define things and then judge those definitions. They may not have access to complete truth but the practical applications of mathematics and sciences are also undeniable, despite their self-referential status.

KarlozFloyd ¡ 1 points ¡ Posted at 18:05:29 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

I live on knowing I don't really know anything and just go on with it, doing what I think is right, regardless if it is what I must do or not. I simply don't have access to all the information I need to make perfect decisions nor do I have the processing capability to handle such information.

mangababe ¡ 5 points ¡ Posted at 20:11:10 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

Knowing the intent of a story and being able to gauge how close a story came to that goal is pretty important in being able to analyze it. If a story is meant to be a comedy, fails to be one, but is a really good tragedy- that's a pretty important distinction.

1-The enjoyment of a comedy and a tragedy are inherently different- if I go into a movie expecting to laugh and come out sobbing I didn't enjoy the movie. I I went in expecting to be sad, that movie was a success.

2- knowledge of what exactly? Technical skills? Subject material? That alone can really change the scope of review. Do you care more about camera angles or period accurate dress?

3- this is also entirely subjective though?

sievold ¡ 10 points ¡ Posted at 15:44:25 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

The problem is I see people make complaints about bad writing like this when in reality they just can’t handle tragedies or unhappy endings.

Thebunkerparodie ¡ 13 points ¡ Posted at 17:13:01 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

or when the author get a majority of good reviews but a small and vocale minority didn't got it (or can be too stubborn to get the point, it's verry annoying when it happen because no matter how clear the author make it, these person wll stil believe their take)

IndicationSea4211 ¡ -2 points ¡ Posted at 03:17:24 on April 1, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

“Don’t got it”? That tells me everything I need to know about you. You can’t even use basic grammar right yet I’m supposed to believe you have reading comprehension and “get it”.

Typical Gege MeatRider. Accusing every one of what they’re suffering from.

Thebunkerparodie ¡ 5 points ¡ Posted at 08:27:47 on April 1, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

you know being like that with me won't help your case? I guess pedagogy by explaining me why my english is wrong because english is not my first langage isn't a thing now...

Me making mistakes doesn't mean my point is invalid, people definitly ccan miss the point of a scene by injecting their own headcanon about the characters or making things way worst than they are and they can be stubborn too

ThespianException ¡ 0 points ¡ Posted at 15:16:43 on April 1, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

I can't tell if this is a joke comment or not and that's a little concerning

IndicationSea4211 ¡ 1 points ¡ Posted at 20:36:45 on April 1, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

You can’t tell 🤦🏾‍♀️.

This is probably too much for you 🤷🏾‍♀️.

Denbob54 ¡ -11 points ¡ Posted at 15:11:43 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

Well unless the Arthur wants to drive away there audience and get their series canceled. I don’t think they want there characters to be genuinely hated and despised.

sievold ¡ 18 points ¡ Posted at 15:43:18 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

I mean, Joffrey in Game of Thrones was meant to be genuinely despised.

Denbob54 ¡ 1 points ¡ Posted at 18:03:24 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

When I mean a character being genuinely despised I mean a charater who is hated by the audience so much that they woulf rather have them written out of the show and want nothing to do with them. Even if they get punished for their actions

sievold ¡ 2 points ¡ Posted at 00:57:22 on April 1, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

Ah. I can agree with that. I would classify that more as an unwise misstep on the author's part. Mineta from Mha reminds me of this.

HappiestIguana ¡ 4 points ¡ Posted at 18:35:27 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

Uncut Gems is an amazing movie and the main character is the most frustrating, annoying, please-punch-me-in-the-face asshole you have ever met. Sometimes the point is to create a strong feeling even if the feeling isn't good.

Denbob54 ¡ -1 points ¡ Posted at 18:46:57 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

That is because the audience members is invested in that character do to that feeling.

If they weren’t they wouldn’t even care that the person is an asshole and just watch something else.

HappiestIguana ¡ 4 points ¡ Posted at 18:48:38 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

You're backpedalling.

Denbob54 ¡ 0 points ¡ Posted at 19:05:39 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

What I am saying is that being an annoying asshole isn’t enough to get an Audience invested unless there is something else that draws them in.

HappiestIguana ¡ 2 points ¡ Posted at 19:25:38 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

I dunno Sandler is an unmitigated asshole from minute 1 of that film, yet he's still compelling in a trainwreck-fascinating kind of way. You just can't stop yourself from watching this asshole self-sabotage again and again no matter how much it hurts to see it.

Denbob54 ¡ 1 points ¡ Posted at 19:29:09 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

And that is the thing that draws people to him. He isn’t just an asshole. But one that suffers the consequences of his horrible behavior and in a way that draws people back to him that he might succeeded.

HappiestIguana ¡ 3 points ¡ Posted at 19:34:08 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

Not really? There's a pretty even mix of the movie rewarding his shitty behavior and punishing him for it. And no, at no point do you want or expect him to succeed, because you always know that even if he wins, he will just take his winnings and gamble them again, and again, and again, until he's lost everything and even after that he'll keep gambling what little he has because you know this man will never be happy with what he has, and he will never learn to be happy with what he has, and the only way this can end is worse and worse and worse until you think he's at rock bottom but he just pulls out a pickaxe and keeps digging, and you can't stop watching this man dig and dig for the same reason you can't look away from a trainwreck.

Denbob54 ¡ 1 points ¡ Posted at 19:35:27 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

Well I guess that is makes people invested in him then.

HappiestIguana ¡ 1 points ¡ Posted at 19:49:20 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

Yes, contrary to your initial point.

Denbob54 ¡ 1 points ¡ Posted at 21:01:37 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

My point is that people don’t like asshole charaters just because they are assholes. It is usually because they are lot complex in their actions, personality and behavior.

Basically this character in gem cuts is someone that the audience members loves to hate because of how self destructive his actions are which in a way makes it entertaining.

HappiestIguana ¡ 1 points ¡ Posted at 21:18:48 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

Okay you shouldn't assume things about a movie you definitely haven't seen

Denbob54 ¡ 1 points ¡ Posted at 21:46:07 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

I am going by information you have provided by the movie and I was Exampling why people enjoyed it.

Mr_sushj ¡ 3 points ¡ Posted at 19:51:53 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

Which is true, most authors don’t make art just for art sake they usually make art with the goal of it being well liked and entertaining, because art and the entertainment industry have a huge overlap, but this isn’t always true some art is made for art sakes and the author doesn’t care for if the work is liked or not and some works are seen as good even tho the author had a totally different intent but the audience liked there interpretation better(death of the author)

That being sad it’s still a pretty bad metric to judge art or any works based on how entertaining or how many people liked it

Denbob54 ¡ 0 points ¡ Posted at 21:02:57 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

Then how do they make a career then if no one likes it?

Mr_sushj ¡ 5 points ¡ Posted at 21:08:32 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

Some dont or they stick to pretty neiche audiences and aren’t popular, not every authors wants to blow up, and some are liked despite their works not being entertaining

Denbob54 ¡ 2 points ¡ Posted at 21:46:35 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

Makes sense.

KazuyaProta ¡ 132 points ¡ Posted at 14:49:16 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

..Cool, then why are you shocked that people are upset at those unsatisfying/frustrated moments or unlikable characters

Because that is treating the author as a failure for succesfully making the audiences feel the emotion that they wanted the audience to feel, which is like, the exact goal of a author.

No_Dragonfruit_1833 ¡ 71 points ¡ Posted at 15:09:05 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

Bruh, game of thrones' writers wanted to "subvert expectations" and people expected decent writing, they achieved their goal but the show sucked hard

Zestyclose_Remove947 ¡ 22 points ¡ Posted at 18:00:26 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

The ASOIAF series is popular exactly because of its subversion of what were fantasy tropes at the time.

When executed well, these techniques hit harder because they are unexpected and tense and sometimes straight up negative experiences.

However, it is also much harder to deliberately evoke dissonance and then satisfyingly resolve to catharsis.

A central tenet of music and more broadly all art is to balance consonance and dissonance in order to provide a variety of experiences and emotions and expressions to your audience. With only consonance, the story becomes stale, repetitive, predictable and saccharine. With only dissonance, the story is erratic, cynical, illogical and unsatisfying.

A trained and exceptional artist has hopefully honed their technique to apply these two concepts seamlessly with eachother, and to transition between them in beautiful conclusions or tragic downturns.

We see just how difficult it is however, for GRRM to finish his series, because the scope and depth that a narrative like that demands is a Sisyphean task.

TicTacTac0 ¡ 27 points ¡ Posted at 16:04:52 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)*

You do have to apply the idea in appropriate contexts. But ya, you wouldn't want to get to a point of having every bad writer going "I was merely pretending to be a bad writer." Luckily, I don't think D&D tried to justify it that way. The way they talked about a lot of their decisions makes it pretty clear they just didn't care anymore. 

I have read a book with intentional inconsistencies, difficult to parse passages, and intentionally obtuse ways to read it, but that was very intentional and reflected the mindset of the characters involved as well as the themes of the chapters. There was a point to it beyond excusing what would otherwise be considered bad writing.

KazuyaProta ¡ 19 points ¡ Posted at 15:12:27 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)*

The worst issues of GOT were the opossite of wanting to subvert expectatives. If anything, I feel they actually restored somewhat their issues by having the balls to let many character arcs end in tragedy after seasons seemingly turning GOT into a standard hero story, with more gore.

The issues of GOT latest seasons come for the fact that they changed a focus part of ASOIAF, which was the focus on the "broken things". The disabled and the ugly (Bran becomes paralytic, Tyrion has Dwarfism, Brienne has Gigantism and later gets mutilated facially, Jaime's redemption attempt starts when he loses a hand after he argued for eugenics for the disabled while being able, etc)

For a quick example: King Bran is from GRRM own word and when reading the books, you can clearly see the foreshadowing for it (especially in ACOK that is basically Bran's test run as a ruler, or the very first chapter which is Bran watching his father carrying a execution), but because DnD did minimize his role even in the early reasons to prop out the handsome warriors and beautiful actresses, they ended up skipping a lot of the building for it.

King Jon and Queen Dany were always meant to be a dream that will never be. The fairy tale that gets crushed for reality.

No_Dragonfruit_1833 ¡ 42 points ¡ Posted at 15:31:06 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

Everybody expected GOT to end on "peace is achieved at a high price" but done in a smart way, thats the problem

Zestyclose_Remove947 ¡ 5 points ¡ Posted at 18:12:08 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

I felt like it coulda gone a more cynical direction. I always knew Daenerys was gonna go full Targaryen tho, the show just fumbled that super hard.

I felt there was a small chance they would all just keep infighting and die to the WW or just unite and fail to defeat them. I also thought that they might go back to infighting as soon as they beat the WW, or a foreign power took advantage of their weakness.

However feels like George wants to set up a cyclicality with the Long Night, I enjoy that in realistic stories, as really life just goes on, we're only 80 years out from ww2. 2-3 generations and things are pretty much forgotten and woven into myth.

nerdcoffin ¡ 5 points ¡ Posted at 19:50:18 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

Well they failed cause even the biggest Daenerys haters didn't expect her to go apeshit I assume. Good twists have proper foreshadowing.

KazuyaProta ¡ -3 points ¡ Posted at 15:32:04 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)*

And when one ask for their ideas of "what is good writing in this case", their answers are hilarious at best.

Ideas like "Jon would archieve peace by killing a loved one...in this case, his brother Bran who is actually a JRPG mastermind Dark Lord who secretly planned the war all along to create a False Utopia build in 1984 Magic Trees! INSERT THE BOSS FIGHT THEME: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LH_CMXV1Z8A&ab_channel=SMTExtended" or "And then Jaime should have archieved redemption by heroically dying against the White Walkers instead of facing the fact that regardless of his personal redemption, there are consequences for his crimes that are affecting the people he claims to love"

CitizenPremier ¡ 3 points ¡ Posted at 17:58:56 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

I just wanted a good revenge story and so I stopped watching after Geoffrey died

Dodo_Baron ¡ 6 points ¡ Posted at 08:26:26 on April 1, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

Yup I stand by Bran being king is the smartest and most satirical ending they could have come up with. It's a fantastic decision undone by terrible execution.

But still a great finale, how do you solve a centuries old war for the throne driven by human greed? Simple, you have an apathetic, immoral, all seeing undying god control the throne for all eternity.

Now humanity has a common enemy they could never defeat, no sense going to war with eachother. When the true enemy knows your every step. It's fantastic hope it gets an actual storyline someday.

Mr_sushj ¡ 2 points ¡ Posted at 19:54:30 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)*

They didn’t just want to subvert expectations, they also wanted other things like people to remain interested and like there show, they didn’t want to subvert expectations and piss people off they wanted to subvert expectations AND have the audience have a sense of enjoyment from the series, in this case by subverting expectations they failed to get the audience to enjoy the series

findworm ¡ 40 points ¡ Posted at 15:56:26 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

Just because you achieved your goals doesn't mean that your goals were good. Generally, stories that are unsatisfying, frustrating to read, or just boring are not considered good (I'm sure there are exceptions, but in the majority of cases this is true), and just because you set out to inflict those emotions doesn't therefore make it good if you manage to arouse those emotions in your readers. Even if the goal was "The reader is meant to feel bored here", I bet the broader goal was "The reader is meant to want to read this story", so if it instead is seen as a black mark on an otherwise good story, or even worse people drops the story because of it, the author has failed.

It's a bit like those users on Reddit that are called something like "pretends_to_be_an_idiot" who go in random comment sections and say stupid shit to then be called out for it. Yeah, you got what you set out to do, but everyone still thinks you're an idiot.

KazuyaProta ¡ 13 points ¡ Posted at 16:02:55 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)*

Generally, stories that are unsatisfying, frustrating to read, or just boring are not considered good

Define unsatisfying. Many beloved stories have endings that end terribly bad for beloved characters, sometimes the entire cast.

The Ragnarok is one of the most beloved mythological tales ever. Its a bad story because most gods died?

"Thor is such a fraud, he killed the Midgard Snake and then he just died because a bit of poison?? And he even makes victory steps like if he is hot shit. The Norse are such hacks!"

It's a bit like those users on Reddit that are called something like "pretends_to_be_an_idiot" who go in random comment sections and say stupid shit to then be called out for it

That is actively searching to be a unlikeable person, which is very different than a writer making a story where bad things happen.

findworm ¡ 21 points ¡ Posted at 17:27:26 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

Okay, I did not argue that "bad writing is when bad things happen", so do not put words in my mouth. I argued that when the feeling you inflict in your audience is something like unsatisfaction, frustration, or boredom, it doesn't matter if you set out to do so, because it's still unsatisfying, frustrating, or boring to read. This is not the same as the characters feeling these things, you can write a frustrated character in an engaging way, but it takes skill.

And I'm not arguing that making your audience feel "bad" emotions is bad writing either, lots of stories make you sad or angry, for instance. I'm saying that if the emotions you inflict in your readers make the reader lose faith in the story, that's a valid criticism from the reader. "Oh, it's what the author wanted you to feel" is not a shield.

Of course, if all you have in a debate is "This took me out of the story" vs. "This did not take me out of the story", then both sides are equally valid, but if the first person says "And when character X said 'I can explain' and character Y said 'Don't bother!' and we spent 3 episodes on that, it really frustrated me and took me out of the story", then the second person's reply of "Oh, the author wanted this to be frustrating" is not really a response that brings anything to the table.

Mr_sushj ¡ 3 points ¡ Posted at 20:52:26 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

I argued that when the feeling you inflict in your audience is something like unsatisfaction, frustration, or boredom, it doesn't matter if you set out to do so, because it's still unsatisfying, frustrating, or boring to read.

This argument is circular

This work is bad because it made the audience feel x > why is it bad if the author did it on purposes > because he made the audience feel x > well why > because the audience felt x and x is bad > but that’s the point, so WHY > because he made the audience feel x

So this is a very poor from of criticism, as it misses the purpose of a character, the purpose of the authors vision

This is not the same as the characters feeling these things, you can write a frustrated character in an engaging way, but it takes skill.

Sometimes the purpose of a character is to make the audience feel a ceartain way, characters that make u fustrated don’t themselves have to be fustrated

And I'm not arguing that making your audience feel "bad" emotions is bad writing either, lots of stories make you sad or angry, for instance. I'm saying that if the emotions you inflict in your readers make the reader lose faith in the story, that's a valid criticism from the reader. "Oh, it's what the author wanted you to feel" is not a shield.

“what the author wanted u to feel” is not a sheild for criticism it’s the basic bar that a critique needs to pass, ur critique is bad if ur agreeing with the primary function of a literary technique, if a frustrating character makes u frustrated then its goal was met, u can make other critiques like the function of the character is at odds with the story, or that it’s not the primary function, but a bad critique would be to call that character bad because it’s frustrating

Of course, if all you have in a debate is "This took me out of the story" vs. "This did not take me out of the story", then both sides are equally valid, but if the first person says "And when character X said 'I can explain' and character Y said 'Don't bother!' and we spent 3 episodes on that, it really frustrated me and took me out of the story", then the second person's reply of "Oh, the author wanted this to be frustrating" is not really a response that brings anything to the table.

I agree in discussions where ur justifying why u like a work, that bringing up the purpose of character or work is bad for discussions and unfruitful, when justifying opinions u should use ur own opinion, but when making a critique the basic purpose of a literary technique has to be taken into account or it’s redundant

findworm ¡ 5 points ¡ Posted at 21:49:12 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

Okay, brass tacks. My argument boils down to:

  1. An author can have a bad idea.
  2. An author can successfully implement this idea, it still doesn't make it a good idea.
  3. A successfully implemented bad idea is still deserving of criticism.

Do you disagree with any of these?

Mr_sushj ¡ 1 points ¡ Posted at 22:14:30 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)
  1. ⁠An author can have a bad idea.

In general no I think execution matters more and it’s hard to say an “idea” is bad without knowing how it’s going to be executed, plenty of films sound bad on paper

  1. ⁠An author can successfully implement this idea, it still doesn't make it a good idea.

…well if the author SUCCESSFULLY executed a bad idea then they succeeded, a bad idea would be something that’s impossible or difficult to execute, if they succeeded the only thing that would be bad is if I didn’t personally like it, which isn’t a good critique

I mean ig u could argue that morally maybe, that bad idea would be something that causes lie harm to others and shouldn’t be explored in society but I don’t think ur talking about that

  1. ⁠A successfully implemented bad idea is still deserving of criticism.

No criticism should be pointed at executions rather than ideas, if an author wants to make a entertaining 10,000 page work on big titted furrys, and they succeed at making an entertaining 10,000 page work that is about big titted fury’s then a bad critique would be to critique the use of furies in the story about big titted fury’s

Do you disagree with any of these?

All of them, critiquing an idea external of the way a story executes those ideas in my opinion is bad criticism, like critiquing a lambo for being fast because u dislike the idea of fast cars

findworm ¡ 4 points ¡ Posted at 22:38:30 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

I think we're talking past each other. You're imagining an author writing a whole story about big-tittied furries, while I'm imagining more like, what if Tolkien decided that the second half of the Two Towers book should be about a big-tittied furry society. Because it doesn't really matter how well you execute it, furries do not fit into Middle Earth. Even if Tolkien had managed to pull it off in a way that made some sense, it would still be the "what the fuck was that about" / "the writers barely disguised fetish" section of the story.

Because yeah, you can set out to write a whole story that's inherently boring or unsatisfying (I don't know who'd want to read that, but I'm sure there exists an audience), but when you just have a couple scenes that are boring or unsatisfying in an otherwise engaging story, they don't make some sort of point or anything, they just drag the rest of the story down.

(Note that when I say "boring" above, I'm not using that as shorthand for "not-action" or "not-plot". Downtime can absolutely be engaging to read. Similarly, "unsatisfying" does not apply to any plot thread not 100% resolved, because a mystery can still be satisfying.)

Mr_sushj ¡ 6 points ¡ Posted at 23:24:02 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

Okey we do largely agree, but where I would qualify in the furry middle earth example is that the idea would be bad because it’s almost impossible to execute, I don’t think there are bad ideas just ideas that are almost impossible, like an artist that wants to paint half America the idea is bad because it’s basically impossible to execute and even if u do somehow succeed there would be so many problems that it wouldn’t even be worth it

The furry middle earth would still be something I would critique the execution of, I would say something like “the author tried and failed to merge these two idea where they just don’t fit, and they contrast each other to heavily to get the intended goal of the author, who seems to be wanting a middle earth high fantasy adventure, and it could only make sense as some sort of weirdly disguised fetish” the ideas themselves are fine but the execution is impossible/imporabable to pull off, it would take a literary, once in life time level genius writer to properly execute the furry middle earth example

but its jarring for me when u say a bad idea that’s executed well as to me that seems almost impossible as a bad idea would be defined on how easy/hard it is to execute

starlightay ¡ 0 points ¡ Posted at 21:36:06 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

I feel like that argument does boil down to “bad writing is when bad things happen” though. Like a story can be frustrating in either a way that is beneficial to the story or in a way that detracts from the story. Criticizing a story because the characters refuse to talk to each other for no reason is valid because it’s lazy writing that contradicts the logic of the story. On the other hand, using GOT for example, it doesn’t make sense to criticize the story because Oberyn dies to the Mountain. It’s frustrating, but it makes perfect sense in the world where the good guys don’t always win and even the smallest character flaws can prove fatal. Building narrative tension relies on balancing frustration with satisfaction, it’s all about the execution of those moments.

findworm ¡ 2 points ¡ Posted at 22:02:49 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

Good point, there are exceptions (and maybe "frustrating" doesn't really belong with "unsatisfying" and "boring" on further reflection, but I feel the point still stands for those two).

This argument brings in a little more nuance than the original rant though, because while it is true that Oberyn's death was frustrating to read, basically no one is saying George wrote a frustrating scene here. People instead say Oberyn did a frustrating thing. All critique here is levied towards the character, not the author, so the defense of "The author intended for you to feel that way" is not being brought up in the first place.

I personally suspect "Oh, this was what the author wanted you to feel" is often only brought up to defend bad or shaky writing in the first place. And I think writing can be bad even when the author succeeds in what they're trying to do, because authors, like anyone else, can have bad ideas. Ie. The author succeeding in what they set out to do does not mean that it was a good thing to set out to do.

starlightay ¡ 0 points ¡ Posted at 23:23:00 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

I think you make a good point when you bring up frustration with the author vs frustration with a character. To me, the main issue that can happen with this critique is when the line between those gets blurred - after all, the author is ultimately the one behind every decision a character makes. If Oberyn was your favorite character (he’s one of mine) you could very easily get mad at Martin for not letting him just finish the Mountain off. At the end of the day, most people don’t desire a perfectly logical story, they want a compelling story.

I definitely take some issue with your last paragraph though. I think personal preference can be confused for “something is bad/poorly written” very easily. For an example of something many would call boring, the LOTR books have all sorts of tangents and downtime, but they’re clearly intended to be like that by the author and even constitute a fundamental part of the appeal for many others. It’s not shaky writing, you may just prefer faster paced stories. So in my experience, I’ve mostly seen the defense used for controversial moments rather than “bad” moments.

Shadow_Wolf_X871 ¡ 1 points ¡ Posted at 15:32:33 on April 1, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

Well for starters there's a difference between a story meant to entertain people, and a supposed prophecy of an actual belief system's apocalypse dude.

Not the strongest example XD

ImanShumpertplus ¡ 1 points ¡ Posted at 01:42:07 on April 1, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

ok congrats author, here’s your reward for achieving that goal

Dry_Pumpkin_4029 ¡ 59 points ¡ Posted at 14:26:06 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

u/Apprehensive_Ring_39 back with another rant totally not about jjk.

I understand the complaint though. Directionless and sustained invoking of negative feelings in the audience can lead to burn out.

scrububle ¡ 16 points ¡ Posted at 16:17:19 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

You weren't lying lmao he's made like 3 in the last week

🎙️ Apprehensive_Ring_39 · -5 points · Posted at 22:47:08 on March 31, 2024 · (Permalink)

Literally I didn't,shut the fuck up.

scrububle ¡ 8 points ¡ Posted at 22:51:11 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

Make me 😗

bog_creature ¡ 1 points ¡ Posted at 16:55:49 on April 4, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

The rant is totally about Gojo; but I get the frustration. Remember that one time that the X-Men movies killed the one character that couldn't be killed?

FunnySeaworthiness24 ¡ 1 points ¡ Posted at 19:41:35 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

Stole my comment

Dry_Pumpkin_4029 ¡ 1 points ¡ Posted at 20:15:38 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

Hmm? I know it's an ongoing joke in this subreddit to point out this guy, but I don't think anyone brought up first for this post?

FunnySeaworthiness24 ¡ 2 points ¡ Posted at 01:23:19 on April 1, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

Not literally I mean you beat me to it

🎙️ Apprehensive_Ring_39 · 0 points · Posted at 22:47:20 on March 31, 2024 · (Permalink)

IT'S NOT. Jeez.

justAnotherGuy3113 ¡ 2 points ¡ Posted at 09:28:42 on April 2, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

just drop jjk atp, it's just sad seeing you like this

NicholasStarfall ¡ 7 points ¡ Posted at 01:31:33 on April 1, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

"Wow, that death was terrible" "Uh, that's the point!" "I'd probably write a different way" "WHAT DO YOU MEAN?"

Forgive the strawman but if it's supposed to make me feel shitty, why get defensive that I didn't like it?

maridan49 ¡ 35 points ¡ Posted at 15:31:11 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

Why some people have such a hard time acknowledging "I don't like this" and instead try to portray their tastes as some objective failure of the author to tell the story the way you wanted?

Parrotflies_ ¡ 19 points ¡ Posted at 16:36:51 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

This guy has evolved to not specifically mention JJK in his rants, but that’s essentially his entire profile lmao. Upset a story didn’t go the way he wanted and constantly ranting about it.

justAnotherGuy3113 ¡ 2 points ¡ Posted at 09:29:53 on April 2, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

it's embarrassing really, if you really despise a manga so much, just drop it.

🎙️ Apprehensive_Ring_39 · 0 points · Posted at 22:48:41 on March 31, 2024 · (Permalink)

No the hell I'm not. Literally said it applies to all forms of media,not just JJK.

And no,I'm not "mad cause the story didn't go the way i wanted",So maybe get your facts straight.

Aggressive-Yam8221 ¡ 9 points ¡ Posted at 18:57:18 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

Something worse than a character being an awful person is when the creators decide to "redeem" him/her because they like him/or the fans like him but don't like that he's completely bad. So basically you can't say anything bad about the character or his writing anymore because they will respond with phrases like "character realized his mistakes" "that's why he tries to be better" "character doesn't expect to be instantly forgiven."

classicslayer ¡ 2 points ¡ Posted at 22:38:20 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

Reminds me of spike from buffy

StrawberryMage13 ¡ 1 points ¡ Posted at 23:23:17 on April 3, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

Rather than a conventional redemption, I tend to prefer it when a series instead gives information or details that completely recontextualize a character and their actions in a way that makes them understandable without absolving them of their sins so to speak. After that if they want the character to pull a face turn then they can do so by having the character trying to repent if needed by making it a character arc rather than simply handwaving everything, especially if they find a way to do so that stays consistent with the character's primary motivations to begin with.

Christoffi123 ¡ 20 points ¡ Posted at 16:23:10 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)*

This is me with Evangelion. Any time I bring up the point that I didn't like the characters and shit ways the show handled certain moments I got hit with that. Intentional does not automatically equal good.

Revlar ¡ 16 points ¡ Posted at 19:18:10 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

Yeah, this one is really common. Evangelion is revolutionary, don't get me wrong, but it's also clearly fumbled over and over and the ending is such an unplanned, replanned, switched, flipped, overcooked mess. All takes on the work suffer from this, especially EOE and Rebuild. It lives on the strength of its concept and its artistic merit, but the throughline is muddled and the tragedy feels truncated.

basilitron ¡ 4 points ¡ Posted at 22:01:27 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

as someone who adores evangelion, i fully agree

DaRandomRhino ¡ 7 points ¡ Posted at 01:17:40 on April 1, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

I think the best interpretation of Eva is literally that Anno decided to channel his grief about his mother passing, his failing relationships, and general malaise is overcome by friends, family, escapism, and being confronted with his own failings and working to improve himself because of it all. The parallels are drawn amazingly between the series and movies if you know his history. Asuka being voiced by his ex, Mari being the spitting image of Anno's wife, and himself saying he was Shinji a variety of times, Gendo having a more than passing resemblance to his mentor, etc.

But I still think it's pretentious and the people that genuinely like it are like Anno before he gets his shit together. It's a deconstruction of a genre that was being deconstructed by it's originator a decade before in a way that wasn't swinging for your face with a wrecking ball. And genuinely feels hacked together if we don't apply headcanon to it, and know that his symbology is just flashing lights that don't mean much of anything, they just look like more than that because of the context they're presented in.

LibraryBestMission ¡ 3 points ¡ Posted at 19:06:51 on April 1, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

The Yoshiyuki Sadamoto manga is the best Evangelion. Many characters get more development, the throughline feels more thought out and present, and Shinji has a backbone which helps him feel like a driving gear in the story. That and thought bubbles help to show what characters are thinking, so you understand them and their actions better.

False_Major_1230 ¡ 32 points ¡ Posted at 14:44:51 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

Another jjk rant 🙃

🎙️ Apprehensive_Ring_39 · 10 points · Posted at 14:45:27 on March 31, 2024 · (Permalink)

No the hell it's not,I didn't even mention it once.

superdan56 ¡ 36 points ¡ Posted at 15:00:59 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

The brain rot has afflicted everyone you cannot escape do not resist!

False_Major_1230 ¡ 23 points ¡ Posted at 14:47:39 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

Sure buddy I trust you bro

LucaUmbriel ¡ 5 points ¡ Posted at 16:23:55 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

I'm not, which is why I don't say anything to people who find a character unlikable or a plot unsatisfying or whatever when that was the author's intent and I'm pretty sure 99% of the people you're trying to reach with this argument don't either

I and others say shit to people who go "this character is unlikable and therefore the writing is bad!" or "this character's death was pointless so the writing is bad!" or "this scene is awkward so the writing is bad!" and then double down or hide behind arguments like yours when told "yeah, that's the point"

be disappointed, be unsatisfied, be annoyed, be whatever but if you say that, get told "yeah, that's the point", then cry "but that's bad writing!" then you're not surprising anyone that you had the reaction that they author expected, you're whining because the book wasn't written for you

Funkin_Valentine ¡ 3 points ¡ Posted at 19:34:14 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

You basically described Overlord (The anime) and its fanbase 👍

Chatyboi ¡ 9 points ¡ Posted at 16:24:11 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

I think I hate people on both sides of the argument.

Everyone disagreeing with OP by saying that you're the problem and not the writer is aggravating as hell, like the writer could have just made a mistake no one's perfect and story telling is subjective as hell anything.

But also yes, a writer can make a character with the intent to be unlikable and that's not a bad thing, or making a death unsatisfying. However I tend to weigh the pros and cons of these actions, what is gained from it versus what is lost.

If this is about jjk, which I feel like it is with the discussion of an unsatisfying death, then there are examples of good and bad executions of this. Spoilers for jjk manga, characters like Nobara or Yuki could've added a lot more to the story then the shock that came from their deaths. But then Gojo was pretty much at the end of his narrative relevance anyways so we don't lose anything from his death, in fact everyone expected him to die to Sukuna anyways. Sure I wish the story hadn't shit on him after his death and they stopped glazing Sukuna but the actual death is relatively fine.

MakisYujiPicsStache ¡ 33 points ¡ Posted at 14:27:08 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

Just because “The Point” makes you feel like shit doesn’t mean it’s bad.

Maybe the show simply isn’t made for you. Or maybe you simply don’t have the patience to see if that “wasted death” will actually become more important later (like for instance Gojo’s death in JJK).

🎙️ Apprehensive_Ring_39 · 2 points · Posted at 22:49:13 on March 31, 2024 · (Permalink)

Did I even mention JJK at all? No.

Rappy28 ¡ 15 points ¡ Posted at 17:19:09 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)*

Worst is when people try to accuse you of "not getting the point!!!!". No, I did, but let's be real, I just thought the point fucking sucked. Like maybe it was weirdly dehumanizing of a group of people, or was shallow, or whatever.

Yunan94 ¡ 14 points ¡ Posted at 18:17:07 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

This so much. Too often I see people judging people's 'lack of comprehension and literacy skills', usually as 'you just don't get it', when it's them who can't see beyond their own understanding or interpretation. Like there's nuance and there can be room for discussions and arguments.

leonreddit8888 ¡ 6 points ¡ Posted at 14:56:23 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

I definitely think there are ways to handle that.

The protagonist from No Country for Old Man died an unceremonious way, but that was because the point was to depict just how unpredictable the underworld was.

Anton survived and possibly got away with it, but his calm and perfect facade was cracked when he got into a car accident and his philosophy was destroyed by Carla Jean.

Comfortable-Hope-531 ¡ 1 points ¡ Posted at 10:24:06 on April 3, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)*

The protagonist from No Country for Old Man died an unceremonious way, but that was because the point was to depict just how unpredictable the underworld was.

But what was the point of his "arc" in general? Why is he in the movie?

and his philosophy was destroyed by Carla Jean

Didn't she just refuse to accept said philosophy? That seems too tame for a "destruction". She said "that's wrong", he said "nah, it's correct", and then, she died. Not much to their dialogue.

KongFuzii ¡ 3 points ¡ Posted at 14:45:01 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

Are you talking about The First Law? Ahah I loved the series.

PuzzleheadedShow4464 ¡ 3 points ¡ Posted at 06:35:33 on April 1, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

"Not necessarily talking about any piece of media" Uh-huh.

And, to start, there are 2 different points:

-A character being annoying/really unlikable.

This is usually some stereotyped character which ALMOST serves as a counter to the own protagonist of a history, or the basic, weak-ass boring-ass edgy character.

While another tangent of said character can actually be actually feasible, as in perhaps the character had some sort of shitty past, untrust of others, or any other reasons which one can attribute to their personality. This isn't per se saying that X character sucks because he's an asshole, but more that he's... an asshole. There's a difference between making a Heathcliff at the end of Wuthering Heights asshole of an character and a Bakugo MHA "imma cunt" character.

-This death wasn't made to be satisfying/good and you're supposed to feel frustrated.

I don't know in which way death can be satisfying (in shounen I'd imagine if it's causing some damage to the villain or outright killing him, like that netero vs. meruem fight), but, most of the time, this is influenced by factors outside of the author's hand. I mean, he can be a jackass and just make the story as he goes, but japanese manga press can also just make him milk the fuck out of a series, completely devoluting it from it's original stand-point. But in this case, I'd imagine your rant is about when a death comes out of nowhere and the idea is that you're supposed to be like "wowie, how did that happen?", but instead you're just "that's fucking bullshit".
Which is to say... it's kind of 99% of shounen mangas, where shock value is always at it's peak.

OrcoDio19 ¡ 10 points ¡ Posted at 16:19:23 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)*

This is a very good rant,but you forgot one thing: people can mistake or miss what is the actual point of a certain moment (long comment):

I remember having a discussion about Chojiro death (Bleach) as a major critique for the serie to deserve to fall in quality because of not giving any emotional impact

Now don't get me wrong,I'm the first saying that some Bleach characters should have recived more screentime than others or for themselves. Chojiro is among one of the characters not used. Which is bad indeed

However,how can you act like "uh this character that never did matter in the story died and I didn't feel anything from it"

I'm about to say what you (op) will probably hate to hear,but yes you weren't suppose to cry for him. That's where the surprise come from. Every single fan knew about that death not giving you a sad feeling at all,so it's weird seeing someone acting surprised at the obvious

Were you really expecting to feel something from a death of the most sided of the (side) character group? The point wasn't in fact that

The point was to show the cruelty of the moment,making others feeling worried about the situation and most importantly,building up Yamamoto's rage. Now does this,the actual point,suck? I can't say that for sure but I don't see why not

Was the moment still well executed? Yes,in my honest opinion at least. Then we go for the sadness of Yamamoto losing and knowing he failed

Unfortunately,that moment wasn't good at all because his death and aftermath weren't well executed. And Yamamoto,an actual important side character,didn't recive the right amount of screentime (and so,characterization) for people to care a lot about him as a character (there are people who did feel sad,which is totally fine and not unusual,but still). I honestly felt despaire for the moment and sadness for those who were sad for his departure

But at least,it makes sense being mad about him and the criticism about his moment are totally valid. But what about Chojiro?

A criticism isn't unvalid completely,but if I have to be honest,this one really has less value than others. Since it is missing an entire point

This situation is practically the exact side of a coin,where in the other side there is your rant. You mentioned people being mad at a character's death and how fans act surprised despite the point being exactly "this death was supposed to make you feel mad"

While for Chojiro,his death was never supposed to make you feel sad or mad. Yes,we know no one would have felt bad about him at all,so it makes sense you felt nothing. But the whole point not only wasn't that,but it was missed completely (by the guy I talked with)

Especially since,as I said,it can be a critique,but it's like saying "the Sun is way too hot" as a critique. It really has no right to be a great critique because it doesn't have that much importance or value. Literally there are so many good points you can brought up as Bleach flaws,but this one feels more like an excuse to bring more just because

Plus,as much as we are concerned,we don't even know if the author,Kubo,still tried to make us feel sorry or not (maybe he tried,since he recived a backstory,sad it was very short,maybe something more like JJK S2 hidden inventory arc would have actually helped,showing us more about some characters origins or/and pasts)

Again,the whole point is not even feeling nothing about his death,but it's other things completely. If you miss the point,then it's valid to say "sorry,you didn't get the point"

That being said, I still feel like Kubo did a great mistake with Chojiro as a character. Especially since he was supposed to be important as Yamamoto right hand and the head of the liutenants

Mr_sushj ¡ 2 points ¡ Posted at 21:01:41 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

Totally agree it kinda suck tho saying “u missed the point,” and even if the point is explained u can still dislike that point, it’s just voicing as criticism is redundant, saying “lambos suck because their fast” defeats the point of a lambo being a sports car meant to go fast, at that point ur not disagreeing with the execution(the wheels are bad, steering off, brakes, etc) ur disagreeing with function of the vehicle, which is useless for a car designer who designs fast cars, but it’s not useless as an opinion especially if it turns out that other people also hate lambos, then u can just voice “I hate fast cars” or “fast cars suck because x, y, z”

Stoner420Eren ¡ 20 points ¡ Posted at 15:14:08 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

I haven't even read JJK and I already know this rant is about it

🎙️ Apprehensive_Ring_39 · 8 points · Posted at 15:14:43 on March 31, 2024 · (Permalink)

I didn't even mention JJK once in the title or even in the rant.

Khal_chogo ¡ 17 points ¡ Posted at 15:42:34 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

This dude be reporting on themselves, you don't even mention jjk once and they all suddenly complaining about jjk

🎙️ Apprehensive_Ring_39 · 8 points · Posted at 15:43:30 on March 31, 2024 · (Permalink)

I literally said also that it applies to any media.

Khal_chogo ¡ 1 points ¡ Posted at 16:01:49 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

Yeah, It's a general media type of rant

FunnySeaworthiness24 ¡ 0 points ¡ Posted at 19:43:16 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

Wait Tell me you're trolling and he dont know Or am I dreaming?

Khal_chogo ¡ 0 points ¡ Posted at 20:29:41 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

Huh? What are you talking about?

FunnySeaworthiness24 ¡ 2 points ¡ Posted at 01:22:46 on April 1, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

You're joking 😭😭😭

Alamand1 ¡ 4 points ¡ Posted at 04:50:21 on April 1, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

Dude this poster has built a reputation for like over a dozen jjk rants over the last few months and deleting them when they get pushback. Hard to blame people for developing pattern recognition.

Khal_chogo ¡ 0 points ¡ Posted at 06:02:53 on April 1, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

Damn, I don't even check their history, but this rant is not about jjk, so why people keep insisitng on making it about that?

Theguywhodoes18 ¡ 2 points ¡ Posted at 07:36:19 on April 1, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

Have you ever heard of “dogwhistling?”

Khal_chogo ¡ 1 points ¡ Posted at 07:37:23 on April 1, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

How does that relate to this?

Theguywhodoes18 ¡ 3 points ¡ Posted at 08:59:51 on April 1, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

I’ll give you an example. If someone on Facebook makes a habit of posting memes about how black people are loud, annoying, and violent, only to eventually get called out or what they’re doing, then later they make a post about how certain traits are inherited genetically—for example, they’d state that certain breeds of dogs are disproportionately loud, annoying, and violent—do you think this person is actually talking about dogs?

Khal_chogo ¡ 1 points ¡ Posted at 20:49:15 on April 1, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

Ok he posts about jjk a lot, this post isn't about jjk, what's there to be confused about?

HarleeWrites ¡ 3 points ¡ Posted at 17:22:05 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

I also hate this. I have to read a lot of literature for my degree and I find the absolute worst characters. They're so bad that I end up not enjoying the book. When I voice this, I always get the "bUt tHe aUtHoR mEaNt fOr tHaT." I don't care about author's purpose. They must not want to see books.

Theguywhodoes18 ¡ 5 points ¡ Posted at 08:49:01 on April 1, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

Whenever I see rants like these, I’m reminded that most people consume art as a product and it makes me very sad.

Sometimes, you aren’t the person the work is trying to speak to. Sometimes, that work isn’t what you are trying to speak to. And that’s okay both ways. It doesn’t make someone necessarily a bad reader, and it doesn’t necessarily make the work bad, either.

Art is communication like that. The creator communicates to a medium to make something and then that something will go on to communicate with as many people as it can. But we live in a time where everyone is hyper connected and the possible things to communicate with are overwhelming. With so many things vying for attention, it’s almost a task to not treat engagement as an investment—like your time and energy has bought you the right to a sense of ownership. It’s so entrenched in the way we engage with art, it’s a part of the common vernacular. And when you feel you own something, it’s hard to not get frustrated when it doesn’t give you what you want.

I don’t think readers own the stories they read, but I don’t think the authors own the stories they write either—not in the artistic sense, anyway. I think people own their own relationships with the art they engage with, either as a creator or consumer. And since it’s a relationship it’s important to ask not just how something makes you feel, but also why. This applies to things that you enjoy and things you don’t enjoy. It’ll give you the perspective to understand why some people like something you don’t like or dislike something you do like.

I mainly bring this up because people get caught up in whether something is “objectively” good or bad, which is usually just inviting toxicity where it’s completely unnecessary.

I can see it in your rant, too. You think you have an objective understanding of writing—what’s “good” is what’s pleasurable.

You like characters with likeable protagonists because you like reading stories about people you could see yourself being friend with. Your empathy is more pliable when you find a character magnetic, and because of that you have a preference for it since it’s easier to reach that level of engagement. That’s fine.

You like to read stories where every character reaches a satisfying end. The heroes regularly triumph over the villains. That’s fine.

You like stories where a lot of time is given to show off characters bonding to build the relationships because you value that experience of gradual understanding that can only happen over the course of a story. You need that time to feel engaged. That’s fine.

But not everyone needs all those things to enjoy a story. Not everyone who writes engages with that kind of writing. You’re not wrong for disliking it. They aren’t wrong for liking it. You’re both talking to the wall between you rather than each other. But I’ll admit, I’ll hear out the people who enjoy something before I hear the people who dislike something. I think it’s better to err on the side of appreciation whenever talking about something that someone else made because art is what happens when someone breaks off a piece of themselves and tosses it out into the void. That doesn’t always mean they break off the piece they way they expected to or that they break off the piece they meant to break off. I just don’t like approaching part of someone they willingly shared and talking down to it. It’s why I level with it. Engage with it on its own terms. Give a little something of myself when I have something less than kind to say.

robo243 ¡ 7 points ¡ Posted at 18:25:12 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

Plus Something being "The Point" doesn't always make sense or change the fact that "The Point" Fucking Sucks or is Bad.

Pretty much sums up the arguments I've had amongst more controversial stories and media. Examples being The Last Jedi, The Last of Us Part 2, Attack On Titan etc.

The people who defend those stories usually resort to "you missed the point" or "you didn't understand it" as a refutal for why I think those stories are shit.

And my refutal to their refutal is "I get the fucking point, but the point fucking sucks, is poorly executed, or just isn't convincing."

I know The Last of Us Part 2 wants me to like Abby, wants me to NOT want for Ellie to kill Abby, wants me to think that what Joel did at the end of the previous game was horrendous shit, the problem is the game simply didn't convince me to think that way of those characters and those story beats.

Same with AoT: Eren's corruption post-timeskip, the team-up between the Survey Corps and Marley's Warriors, how the Rumbling is ultimately stopped and the curse removed, or with TLJ: Luke's failure, Luke's death, Snoke's death or pretty much every other development in that film.

I UNDERSTAND what those stories were going for, I just think that what they were going for was shit, and the poor execution only further convinced me that it was shit, whereas a good execution could've changed my mind.

Hikousen ¡ 6 points ¡ Posted at 20:18:24 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)*

Exactly. "If that's what the author intended for you to feel then it's good writing" doesn't take execution into account. You can make someone feel a certain way by throwing a random shock value asspull at them, or you can make them feel a certain way while properly building up to that moment so that when it happens you understand why it happened and feel the way they wanted you to while understanding why this fits in the story. And yes, random tragic shit happening out of nowhere is something that does happen in real life, but realistic doesn't mean good to read, outside of some niche cases where the series sets you up to expect that kind of tragic realism.

Agianttruckofpizza ¡ 2 points ¡ Posted at 21:29:41 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

My biggest problem was that TLOU2 basically took a thought provoking and morally grey end and then gave you the right answer, then it tried to act like that was always the case.

There were people back in 2013 who thought Joel was right and people who thought he was wrong but there was none of this “bad media literacy” crap back then because there was a lot about that ending that was up to interpretation such as Ellie not having consent over whether or not she was okay with dying for the cure or how Marlene sent guys to kill Joel if he even tried to intervene, essentially not giving him any say over what happens to this girl that was in his care for a long time.

If you believed Joel was a selfish asshole that’s fine, but I hate how people say that because of TLOU2 you now should’ve always felt that way about him when that clearly wasn’t what the first game was going for.

Treyman1115 ¡ 2 points ¡ Posted at 05:44:12 on April 1, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

It didn't do that though, it treats Joel's choice about the same, just gives more context. It honestly imo makes him more sympathetic. He directly says he'd do it all over again to Ellie and she was gonna forgive him if he didn't die right after. The Fireflies still aren't treated as good people or something.

The more context part though it gonna lead to more debate about it though.

Not_a_vampiree ¡ 3 points ¡ Posted at 16:42:29 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

Not all stories exist to entertain, I person subscribe to the narrative art should comfort the disturbed and disturb the comfortable.

WittyTable4731 ¡ 2 points ¡ Posted at 17:03:29 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

https://www.reddit.com/r/CharacterRant/s/ilTvNcP8PH

I did a post on a thing concerning unlikable character on purpose vs unlikable unintentionally made and while the latter ruins things

Give it a watch might form a link to your post OP

Pilgrimhaxxter69 ¡ 2 points ¡ Posted at 07:43:13 on April 1, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

I hear this a lot from Persona 3 fans, and it's a really insufferable argument. Cool, half the social links in the game suck but it was totally intentional, which makes it better than P5 and P4 (they have characters I actually want to spend time with)

This also happens with certain Shonen fans (a story about cleaning detergent and sorcerers fighting, for example). Every flaw of the series is treated as though it was intentionally written to make the readers feel a certain way. Therefore, it is good.

I'm a huge fan of the Nasuverse, and I think Nasu had a huge overreliance on sexual violence in his stories (Especially Tsukihime), even as someone not particularly sensitive to the subject matter it got bad enough to the degree that I got brought out of the story and got pissed at the author. I was talking about it with my friend, and he made a point that 'it shows how dark the world is.' Yes, that's the problem.

Burglekutt8523 ¡ 2 points ¡ Posted at 12:59:53 on April 1, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

I know people will hate this sentiment. But, I've been saying this about Tarintino forever. "The movies are SUPPOSED to be bad!" Cool, well uhh.. mission accomplished I guess?

Ren0303 ¡ 2 points ¡ Posted at 14:02:51 on April 1, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

Except there are people who will legitimately think that annoying characters are by default badly written, that’s the issue.

Blizzard108 ¡ 6 points ¡ Posted at 16:55:13 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

Wake up babe new JJK character rant

🎙️ Apprehensive_Ring_39 · 6 points · Posted at 16:55:52 on March 31, 2024 · (Permalink)

Did I even once say JJK in the thread. No?

K then.

Blizzard108 ¡ 3 points ¡ Posted at 17:00:47 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

You don't even have to lol, it's so obvious that it's about Gojo's death and Sukuna

🎙️ Apprehensive_Ring_39 · 3 points · Posted at 17:02:03 on March 31, 2024 · (Permalink)

I literally said it applies to all forms of Media.

ArtistFormerlyVegeta ¡ -3 points ¡ Posted at 22:15:16 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

If you ask me it applies to evangelion a lot more. You like jjk so you see jjk.

HelloYeahIdk ¡ 2 points ¡ Posted at 15:02:14 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)*

Me and my friend when I first got him into South Park and he'd groan audibly "I hate him! He's the worst!" whenever CARTMAN was on screen I'm like chill 😭

Gears109 ¡ 3 points ¡ Posted at 17:38:22 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)*

To further extend this point, this is where I know I get weird looks from people for essentially not continuing a show or anime because I know it’s not for me. Even though I understand the story the author is trying to tell, certain things are just too cruel or too weird or too sad for me to be invested in. I don’t blame the story for it, because it’s obvious the creator is telling a different one from what I would want to see, but it is frustrating when people get weird at you for saying you dropped a show because of how it treats its characters.

Art should be allowed to express all sorts of complex human emotions and such. Even the negative and tragic. Some of the greatest, most moving, and touching versions of art originate from terrible and horrible circumstances.

But fundamentally, when I sit down to watch something, or read something, or experience something, I can be awed by its creative and artistic vision but I’m watching it to be entertained. And if I can’t be entertained because the themes of a show focus too much on human suffering or too much on the futility of life, then it’s not a piece of media I’m interested in. Because I already get enough of that in the real world.

To give some examples of things I can’t watch.

I can’t watch Berserk, it looks fucking amazing, but the general despair and atrocities that just casually happen is too much for me. I can’t watch Invincible, because the gore and wanted disrespect for human life, or any life really, is just excessively cruel and nauseating for me. I can’t watch The Boys for the very same reason. Re:Zero just pissed me off with how much of a dumbass the main character is. And The Watchman just depresses me.

I’ve learned over time that these pieces of art, and these pieces of media aren’t for me. So, I don’t bother to judge the things that I know most definitely aren’t for me.

I don’t like Invincible and The Boys because as I get older, I value the symbolic nature of Hero’s and what they are supposed to represent over the deconstruction of hero’s. That’s why I can’t get into any of these Deconstruction of hero’s type shows. It doesn’t mean they are bad. They clearly have a message to tell. But it’s not for me, and when I tell that too people they look at me like I’m crazy for not being entertained by something that clearly makes me uncomfortable.

Edit: Also, add JJK to the list. Just have not liked the show from a fundamental level based on what I’ve seen. Even if I do think it’s cool.

CortezsCoffers ¡ 7 points ¡ Posted at 18:01:23 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)*

Deconstructions in general, the kind that can be summed up as stories that ask "What if X was real?", just feel so utterly pointless to me. Like debating how many angels could dance on the head of a pin. It's just empty navel-gazing. And I especially can't stand it when the writing acts like it's being super clever by subverting your expectations about what's going to happen, as if it's some great accomplishment to take the usual tropes and just do the opposite of them in your story.

Gears109 ¡ 4 points ¡ Posted at 19:48:40 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

Exactly, because to me, stories like that tell an entirely different point then the original work it’s deconstructing. So I just don’t enjoy it as much.

A Super Hero is supposed to be, fundamentally above all else, a hero. Yes they can be troubled by a bad past, yes they can struggle with what right and wrong really means etc. But at the end of the day they shouldn’t be taking ‘realistic’ actions, they should be doing something…well, Super, to say the day. But perhaps more importantly, what they are doing should, above all else, be Heroic.

A Hero can make mistakes. A Hero is allowed from time to time to have selfishness or Vice win out against their better nature. But at the end of a day, a Super Hero should be saving the day by finding that third option that nobody else can. By using their powers, or lack of powers, to do good and make the world a better place. I believe that messaging is important, because Hero’s reflect our ideals as a society.

When you take that away and make the quote unquote Superheros are actually villains in all but name, or are constantly falling from grace, or are no better than the villains they are fighting, it just looses a lot of the magic and luster for me.

And I’m not saying you can’t subvert or deconstruct that notion of what Superhero’s would be like in an actual society. I’m just saying, for me, it doesn’t fundamentally tackle the actual messaging and role Super Hero’s play in the public ethos.

Spider Man is a hero people love because he’s one who always does the right thing, no matter how hard he suffers. To the point where it’s become so unfair to him that fans are upset at the latest comic run and there’s a whole Spider Verse movie arguing a point that Hero’s don’t have to suffer to be Hero’s from a meta narrative. It makes those moments where Peter can actually catch a break and actually be happy so special for everyone. Because everyone just wants to see him succeed and be happy after all the tragedy he has been through.

There’s something…really real about that. Getting a bunch of people to care about a random fictional characters happiness. In a way, SpiderMans willingness to do good in a fake world, has directly inspired many people in the real world to become kinder and empathize with someone who isn’t even real. That lesson can be translated into the real world, it can make us better people, and it’s why I overall enjoy the Super Hero genre as a whole.

What would an evil reversed deconstructed Spider Man that exists in either The Boys Universe or Invincible even do for me that the original doesn’t already accomplish?

Nothing, if we’re being honest. An entertaining hypothetical for some for sure. But for me, it just doesn’t work.

Mr_sushj ¡ 2 points ¡ Posted at 21:23:38 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

If u view deconstruction as just doing the opposite then ur starting at a warped view and angle, deconstructing a trope or concept isn’t just doing the opposite it’s supposed to be well a deconstruction, breaking down a concept and seeing things that make them up

When for example u take an idealized concept of a hero and put them into the real world, we can see which internal parts of the concept are incompatible, idealized, or unrealistic and which parts are compatible or can be applied, at its best deconstruction can actually have u appreciate the concept much more

invincible is good example as mark is still a hero, invincible premise is being a hero in a cruel world worth it, and marks answer is yes, even tho mark is in this bloody cruel world he has an invincible mind and keeps trying and being heroic even if there is a chance he will fail, even if the chance is high, he still perseveres, by showing heroism in a more difficult and maybe relatable light it can actually make it easier for the audience to be heroic

brando-boy ¡ 2 points ¡ Posted at 21:19:22 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

i can definitely at least respect this position

there are so many people out there just obsessed with the idea that they HAVE to consume a certain piece of media, whether it’s the current hot thing, or someone you look up to enjoyed it, or whatever else, and then blaming not liking it as a failure of the writer compared to acknowledging “yeah this is all narratively fine and the writing is logical, but it’s just not the kind of story that i like to engage with”

Gears109 ¡ 2 points ¡ Posted at 21:44:32 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

Thanks, and that’s more or less my disposition on the matter.

I pretty much default to the position that unless I like a show enough to finish it, I have no authority to critic it. Yes, I can say why in detail I didn’t like a show and why I lost my immersion with it and dropped it if asked. But I’m not going to go out of my way to critic something I haven’t finished unless it’s relevant to a broader point like this discussion. Doesn’t matter how popular something is at the time, if you don’t like it, stop waisting time trying to force yourself too.

And even then, from personal experience of trying to get into film, the actual level of production required to make something ‘good’ gave me a new perspective on how much work any creative work actually takes. Even the presumed ‘lazy’ shows still required at least a few people to put in the work to get it made. I can’t really fault those creators for trying their best to execute their vision, even one I disagree with. And because of that experience I have a lot more empathy towards any creative work, even one’s I dislike.

Not to say you need to finish something to critic it. It’s more so understanding your own needs and wants when consuming media. It doesn’t matter if the 8th episode in an anime is amazing according to every anime YouTuber on the planet, if you are suffering through 8 episodes of a show you dislike just to get there. From personal experience, it’s better to just walk away and watch something you’ll actually enjoy. Of course you’re going to have harsh criticism of a product if the product was never meant for you anyway.

I do think it’s the responsibility of an author to make it clear from the start though what kind of story they want to tell, even in small ways. You can completely shock or throw off your audience with a surprise twist and or ending they didn’t see coming, while still making sure that those twists and shocks lines up with the themes of the full body of work. It’s mainly when it runs contradictory to the themes presented for most of a shows that people have issues with something.

The reality is if you think too hard about any one story then tend to fall apart, and that’s because the collective consciousness of any audience consuming a body of work is always going to out think the more limited amount of people creating the thing. Instead of calling something stupid because a creator didn’t think of an option that you did, acknowledge the fact they didn’t and either move on and enjoy what comes next or put down what you’re doing and watch something that will better align with what you want from a story.

Idk, just rambling at this point. Main point still stands. Recognizing something isn’t for you and moving on is just as important as honest critics of something.

Alik757 ¡ 2 points ¡ Posted at 02:36:27 on April 1, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

Is like when I say "Shigaraki is a shit villain and a waste of panel time" then his stands are like "he supposed to suck as villain you don't get the story themes!" how annoying these people are

Salt_Replacement3843 ¡ 1 points ¡ Posted at 11:56:46 on April 5, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

You're worse. 

N0VAZER0 ¡ 2 points ¡ Posted at 00:17:02 on April 1, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

"you don't get it, it sucks on purpose" do you hear yourself

PastStep1232 ¡ 2 points ¡ Posted at 09:45:04 on April 1, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

OP, in your opinion unlikeable = badly written? When Denethor, the Steward of Gondor, behaves like a complete douche in Lord of the Rings is he badly written? When Shinji from Fate: Stay Night behaves atrociously is it also bad writing, are we not supposed to hate him just like Emiya does? Is Judas not supposed to be an unlikeable scoundrel who sells out his closest friend, Jesus, for thirty pieces of silver? Is this also bad writing?

I agree on the points that things have to be written well and not just for shock value, but seeing you list unlikeable characters among the sins of fiction is so, so bizarre to me. It's better when characters make you feel different things, as this speaks to the diversity of emotion that the author can invoke. Of course, works of fiction that invoke only the positive emotions exist, aka the "feel good" works, but negative emotions are just as important to a narrative, if that narrative aims to achieve any level of complexity whatsoever.

Iced-TeaManiac ¡ 1 points ¡ Posted at 16:43:03 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

Is this about JJK

🎙️ Apprehensive_Ring_39 · 5 points · Posted at 16:43:24 on March 31, 2024 · (Permalink)

No,just in general.

Worth_Ad_2079 ¡ 2 points ¡ Posted at 17:02:59 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

I know a JJK rant when I see one

🎙️ Apprehensive_Ring_39 · 3 points · Posted at 22:51:13 on March 31, 2024 · (Permalink)

I didn't even mention JJK.

Thebunkerparodie ¡ 1 points ¡ Posted at 17:10:24 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

tbh, sometimes people can thnk a character is unlikable even if it's not the case, and it's not the fault of the writting necesseraly,, I noticed this tend to happen with flawed good guy a bunch with some acting like they're as bad as the bad guy even if the media make it clear it's not the case. People are also able to view a situation way worst than it really is (per example, the doom headcanon for after the ducktales finale when huey had a verry speciic line where he told scrooge he doesn't have to worry about him and the other or some acting like he's only overprotective of webby when the scene has him carrying more than 1 lifejacket showing he wasn't going to be just for webby or the idea that he doesn't care about may and june, him not being with them at that verry specific moment doesn't mean he doesn't care about them).

Snoo_72851 ¡ 1 points ¡ Posted at 20:15:02 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

I have to agree, like the best example for this is Haruhi Suzumiya's Endless Eight arc. I don't care if it's the intended artistic vision, I hate it. I will, however, add that when it comes to unlikeable characters, it can be a boon to their likeability in a roundabout way. I have on occasion used the phrase "God, this character fucking sucks, I love him".

The worst version of this meanwhile is when a character is unlikeable, and meant to be unlikeable, but the reasons for both are completely separate. A good example is RWBY's Cinder Fall, who is meant to be unlikeable because she's a power-hungry homicidal maniac... but who is unlikeable because she's just annoying, and never really develops beyond a cartoon villain despite how much better it would make her as a character. Ironically, in the much less serious chibi spinoff she goes full ham as a cartoon supervillain, wih evil laughs and evil poses and yelling about dastardly schemes, and she's my favourite character there.

simone3344555 ¡ 1 points ¡ Posted at 21:27:47 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

I get your point completely but I also get the other point. Because a lot of people believe because a something in a media is bad because they feel a certain way about it, but of the author intended it for people to feel that way, then its not really an issue… like I can criticize an author writing an unsatisfactory ending if they were going for one, but if they didn’t want it, who am I to criticize it? I will still complain because I hate endings that leave me unsatisfied but I won’t be criticizing the media because whats the point?

brando-boy ¡ 1 points ¡ Posted at 21:53:14 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

i think it depends

as an example there’s a moment about halfway through the xenoblade chronicles 3 video game where the party is infiltrating into a prison to break someone out, and they have to temporarily act as actual inmates, and for maybe about 30-60 minutes, the game has you doing basically the equivalent of menial prison labor: go out and grab some berries in the yard for dinner, hey a couple monsters are in this area kill them real quick, etc

a lot of people cite this as a really low moment in the game, calling it “padding” “boring” “mandatory busywork”, whatever you can think of. but like, yes, that is the point, that section is an obvious commentary on how parts of the prison system function and affect the inmates and the game at large is a commentary on people in power manipulating, using, and not caring about others. being bored during that segment IS the point, your party is bored too! when a writer can instill in the reader/viewer/player the exact same emotions that the characters in-universe are feeling, that is a success of the writing and should not be seen as a negative.

griffith from berserk is an absolutely vile person, one that couldn’t and shouldn’t ever be forgiven. a literal demon, violated one of his most trusted comrades in front of his own best friend who was the lover of the girl, sacrificed the comrades he spent years and years with as if they were nothing AFTER they rescued him, and then built a literal empire on their figurative corpses, /BUT/, he’s a fucking fascinating and masterfully written, and miura’s ability to write that intrigue and sort of depth into such an abhorrent person is something to be admired

writers and artists in general do not “owe” anybody “entertainment”

as an example of something that didn’t do this well, let’s use the last of us 2, i think the messages the game wants to convey make sense, but they are not delivered in a way that, imo, is as effective as it could be, and i think a large portion of that could have been remedied with some small changes. for example i don’t like how the structure of the game is basically ALL of ellie’s journey, THEN all of abby’s, then the final part. i think presenting them in parallel would’ve amplified the messaging much more (i.e. you do day 1 ellie, then day 1 abby, etc). ellie’s descent further into the depths of revenge, pushing away those closest to her directly contrasted in almost real time with abby’s journey thats basically a big rescue mission, caring for and bonding with others after her own revenge, namely lev.

mangababe ¡ 1 points ¡ Posted at 22:12:39 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

I find that the frustration tends to either come from

A- disliking a character because of technical execution rather than thematic intent and the author not wanting to separate the two

Or

B- the reader being the type of person being criticised by the "unlikable" elements of the story trying to claim the existence of the theme in the story is in and of itself technically bad.

Or

C- the author thought they were doing something cool and in reality completely missed the point and people are pointing out that the character is more or less unlikable for the wrong reasons. (Think "story tries to portray the scary and alienating existence of being mentally unwell, ends up playing into the stereotype that mental health is monsterous/ dangerous/ abusive" but the author doesn't understand that's the issue, not the "likability" of the mentally unwell character ")

Like if a story is about how femme trauma and anger is only accepted by society if that anger is sexualized/ fetishized- being upset at a male lead who is a chauvinistic pig or a female lead who is manipulative and materialistic? You can say those characters are assholes sure- but that doesn't make it a bad movie. If those characters are being portrayed like middle school anti bullying PSAs? That's bad writing.

Some of my favorite characters are glorious assholes, I would never want to be friends with them- and frankly ime, you have to be a better than average writer to sell me on someone I should hate. Same goes for when the point of a movie is one I generally disagree with- think the vaguely manifest destiny vibes a lot of stories about adventure and space exploration have- If I'm already in a critical mindset towards a character/theme my mind is going to be alert to faults in the writing in general.

Buuuuuut to be frank a lot of people are not Uber nerds for literary/ storytelling analysis and don't really have the toolset for distinguishing what they don't like about a story from what is good/ bad about a story.

StarOfTheSouth ¡ 1 points ¡ Posted at 01:10:51 on April 1, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

This reminds me of the Torchwood episode "Countricide", where the ending is supposed to be very unsatisfactory, because that ties into an ongoing character arc and a storyline that runs through the season. And I get that, I respect that, I understand what the goal here is, and I think they accomplished it.

But in succeeding in creating an unsatisfactory ending to the episode, I have an ending that I find unsatisfactory. As such, I don't like it, because I feel unsatisfied.

vizmarkk ¡ 1 points ¡ Posted at 04:39:40 on April 1, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

TBF look at Van Gogh. Lived his whole life getting shit on til he died and now hes hailed as one of the masterclass artists

ZWS_Balance ¡ 1 points ¡ Posted at 02:54:56 on April 4, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

Unrelated to the post but, JJK?

welchssquelches ¡ 2 points ¡ Posted at 15:43:39 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

I just wrote a rant about something similar, and this basically sums up every single issue I have in the rant with the media I was talking about so perfectly lmao.

I fucking love reading revenge themed stories but they are littered with this bullshit/hack writing, "Erm you're supposed to feel bad!!" yeah, no, when I'm reading something about revenge I want to see some god damn revenge man!! They always cop out with some stupid moral shit "Erm revenge will leave you unfulfilled!!" or "Sometimes revenge is bad and u die" like oookay please quit writing garbage

Do_U_Too ¡ 0 points ¡ Posted at 17:37:14 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

Nope, I entirely disagree because I spent too many years seeing bad takes from people hating on Evangelion exactly because they wanted a generic mecha anime and instead got a deep story about the human experience and how you should live your life in the real world instead of removing yourself from society and living in a fantasy world just because you are afraid of being hurt.

Revlar ¡ 4 points ¡ Posted at 19:28:56 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

That wasn't always the point of Evangelion. Evangelion isn't a clean cut ad for a support helpline. It's a messy piece of art by a messy, suffering artist. It's shot full of flaws. Not acknowledging those flaws is lazy.

Do_U_Too ¡ -1 points ¡ Posted at 19:32:44 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

They spell out the entire point of the series in the third episode...

Revlar ¡ 4 points ¡ Posted at 19:41:59 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)*

No they don't. They talk about something Anno was thinking about, which isn't even the main theme of the series.

It's practically impossible to discuss Evangelion because there's so many different works and so many people watch them with a particular lens the fandom has developed. Hardly anyone pays attention to what's actually being depicted. They're happy to watch it in a zombified state while repeating the mantra "it's about the hedgehog's dilemma, bro"

Anno did not plan out or write Evangelion ahead of time. He had overarching ideas for it, but the anime doesn't actually succeed at communicating them, and it certainly doesn't have a clear cut message like "you should touch grass". The story of the original anime ends in human instrumentality with absolutely no sign that anybody will ever touch grass again.

Do_U_Too ¡ 1 points ¡ Posted at 21:03:31 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

It ends with human instrumentality and it direct points out that: orange soda are people in this hivemind state where no one gets hurt. To get out of the orange soda state is a choice about accepting life as it is.

It's the whole theme of the story.

And it even circles back in End of Eva, making a meta comment about how Eva itself became orange soda for people (which was predicted in the original anime), so Shinji gets out and leaves Eva behind.

Revlar ¡ -1 points ¡ Posted at 02:25:34 on April 1, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)*

Nobody gets out of the orange soda in the original ending. Shinji accepts opening himself up to others and becomes one with everyone, which is the purpose of instrumentality. He is congratulated by the dissolved mass of humanity, represented by everyone he knows. Even speaking of orange soda and dissolution in this ending is a stretch, since none of that is shown to happen during instrumentality in this version. Instead it seems to be a sort of spirit journey without an end. Shinji takes his first step in overcoming the fear that would've led him to reject unity with others.

EoE depicts him leaving the sea of LCL, but that ending is not the same as the original ending, and he leaves the sea without any epiphany about the hedgehog's dilemma in that movie. He sees a destroyed world, Rei dead and Asuka, who he proceeds to strangle.

 You are combining the endings to make them say what you want them to say, with no care or regard for what they actually depict.

Do_U_Too ¡ 1 points ¡ Posted at 04:14:12 on April 1, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

Go ahead and rewatch it then

Revlar ¡ -1 points ¡ Posted at 06:20:54 on April 1, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

How about you do, instead of reading other people explain it to you and nodding your head, like you clearly did originally.

Do_U_Too ¡ 1 points ¡ Posted at 08:19:48 on April 1, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

Just watch the last 10 minutes of the last episode, then come back.

I would even do you the favor of linking it but there is nothing on YT, so I guess you have to go watch it on Prime if it's still there.

Revlar ¡ 0 points ¡ Posted at 12:57:15 on April 1, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

How about you go do that.

RancherosIndustries ¡ 1 points ¡ Posted at 16:49:11 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

Yeah, I agree. Some writers are absolutely full of themselves and then wonder why nobody likes their stuff.

Cinnamon0999 ¡ 1 points ¡ Posted at 18:53:47 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

why does no one on this sub ever want to give examples it's ridiculous

nerdcoffin ¡ 4 points ¡ Posted at 19:56:32 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

You might get proven wrong if you provide evidence

brando-boy ¡ 4 points ¡ Posted at 21:23:26 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

because this guy is obviously thinking about jjk while writing this, it’s like 75% of everything he does, but he knows if he explicitly says that then people will continue to roast him

mozgus3 ¡ 2 points ¡ Posted at 10:59:25 on April 1, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

Because this guy only really talks about one series, but because people have started making fun of him and his terminally online persona who churns 3 posts a week and then deletes the ones who don't get positive traction, he tries as much as possible to not make any example of the only series he clearly wants to talk about.

StaticMania ¡ 1 points ¡ Posted at 19:12:57 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)*

I won't be surprised when people "feel" that way.

But it's a totally different thing to treat feeling those things as a bad thing or the "fault" of the story.


There's also a difference between those type of reactions being intended plus actually servicing the story and those type of reactions being intended but making the story worse.

At this point it's a lot more subjective and depending on the audience's interpretation and what some people personally want.

Morrighan1129 ¡ 1 points ¡ Posted at 23:14:41 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

I loath the argument of 'this thing was supposed to make you feel frustrated!'

Like... I did not come here to be frustrated by my escapism media. I came here to forget about my frustrations in my actual life, to have fun, and enjoy a thing. Not that I can't be frustrated with a thing, but somebody telling me that it was supposed to frustrate me is infuriating.

Michael_Aaron_Dunlap ¡ -2 points ¡ Posted at 18:06:22 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

Again,Something being "The Point" doesn't change if the Point fucking sucks.

I don't think the point sucks, so...

fadzkingdom ¡ -2 points ¡ Posted at 18:17:42 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

This sounds like a vaguely different complaint because if the intended purpose was to make the audience happy a character is dead or meant to be unlikable the reaction would be…happiness. If a lot of people frustrated at an outcome means the author didn’t correctly portray their intent.

fadzkingdom ¡ -2 points ¡ Posted at 18:20:15 on March 31, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

Sure some audiences will be angry no matter what if they aren’t force-fed what they want but you can get rid of fan favorites and still make an audience happy and that’s a lot harder than killing of a reviled character in my opinion. So if there’s a huge chunk of people criticizing something what the author perceived and what the audience perceived are different.

Axion42 ¡ -3 points ¡ Posted at 01:30:30 on April 1, 2024 ¡ (Permalink)

Bad media literacy strikes again